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These last few chapters have been pretty good. They've fallen into a rythm that wasn't there before (the early teens were a bit choppy). I especially like that someone else has shown up to distract Neji a bit, and that Gaara is getting a bit serious. More, please?

i read the whole thing on one sitting ^_^ hehehe normally i come here for a dose of hard nc-17s but your story makes me all gooey inside ^_^ naruto is awfully foxxxxxy in this one *giggles*

Outstanding fic. Well written with good charactor development and a coherent plot. Slightly difficult to make the switch between charactors in the beginning and very unsure how Naruto feels about all the attention and whom his attention is directed at until pretty far into it. Really draws the reader in and makes them care about the charactors. Look forward to seeing more chapters on this one. Good Job!

wow, this fic is amazing so far!!!! i've been keeping track of it for a few months, i just never got around to reviewing XD well, here's my review then! i love it so far, cant wait for your next update ^_________^! <3 (and, do you mean the CN anime convention?? o_o *was there*)

I know it's been a while since I reveiwed this fanfiction, but it's just so hard to think of something worth posting as a review when it's always good.
Just thought I would let you know I'm still loyally following your fanfiction. It's so good. Man, it's like its on novel. I'm eager for the next chapters to come.
And I know how writers block is, I've only updated my own account once in the last 2 months. I really need to be more consistant. But I'm not supposed to talk about me in a review to you.

So just keep it up, you've definatly made me a fan of Naru/Sasu pairings when I never was one before so yay for your amazingness!

I can't believe I put off reviewing this, I feel horrible >.<. This was introduced to me by a fan of your works, and I am really loving the story thus far. For one thing, it's damn hilarious and you make Naruto and Sousuke play off one another's words so skillfully. I've had more than a few out-loud giggles, especially on the chapter involving Sasuke's fear of horses. The way the horse was practically talking was a also a cool touch, major props to you for that! ^.^ Though, I noticed that later on in the story, around after the 15th chapter, the whole frightening "They're gonna get Naruto if its the last thing they DO..." vibe is starting to wear off and being replaced by a more comically romantic, lightly plot-filled atmosphere with Sou/Nar. This is a good and, well, maybe a bad thing. Just maybe giving you a heads up as to whether you are trying to lull the reader into a false sense of security, or Gaara/Neji are starting to realize that maybe Naruto is out of their league. Lol, I think it's the first one. Nonetheless, I look forward to more chapters and hopefully Sousuke will stop being such an ass and just be direct with Naruto for once! :P

Hey, this is the first time I've reviewed for you, but I've been following Chasing Naruto for a bit now (a month or so, maybe?). Just wanted to let you know I'm thoroughly enjoying it :3

And since this is posted on AFF there will be smex, yes? Yeeees? ;D

yay yay yay!!! another chapter!!!! the narusasu is progressing! today is a good day! oh, and there was a mention of orochimaru-sama! i can't help it...i love the guy. maybe it's 'cause he has some obession with sasuke-kun. anywho, i really really can't wait for when naruto and sasuke-kun go to the show....though i don't know what kind of show it is. i must say that i really liked the tenten and neji thing going on. i hope those two end up together. i'm looking forward to more narusasu and orochimaru-sama! update!!

Love it to death, as usual -- I enjoyed how Naruto was secretly checking out Sasuke's butt when he was wandering off. Give me another chapter, and I'll give you a full page review, full microsoft word size, lots of detail, delicate critiquing if requested. I'm dying to do that, really, I'm fond of your work. Let me do fan-art of it sometime.

-Mina

I'm really impressed, that you manage to keep them all in character - that doesn't happen often in stories.
Although I think that sometimes Naruto is praising himself a little too much here ;>
I wouldn't have expected him to be so stubborn about his not-quite-relationship with Sasuke too - from time to time he imho appears too self-assure.

Well, that's pretty much all the critique I have o.o
I really like reading this story - I always have a grin on my visage, when you're embarassing Sasuke >:D
Please keep on writing this one ^^

~lime