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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Hao
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO if u will stop i will hunt u down and make you gimme all of the story!!!!! i love it, i read all the chapters i missed and this story is so great!!!!!!! i can;t wait for more!!! pleas dont stop!
person SlightlySane
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! I've been waiting for this update. I'm so happy Neji's found a bit of guidance-- and in the form of a cute girl, no less! We may as well just cross him out of the running all together. :P But Gaara-- gah, that pest. Naruto and Sasuke are both so STUBBORN. XD Gah, leave it to them to wait for the other to confess and only molest eachother in their sleep. Ah, well, keep it up! I'll be anticipating the next chapter! <3!
person fyredevyl
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, get that inspiration a-going. Mine is low too, so I must divert my attention to such wonderful stories like your own. You can't fail me!!!
Great chapter though. And just b/c there's no smut, doesn't mean it's not a good chapter.
Keep on writing.
Ja!
person adri
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DON'T YOU DARE DROP THIS FIC!!!!! Please continue it and update soon!!!! T-T
person shadedfaith
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated ^^ I've been checking every so often and then... BAM! You updated! Hm... that was a very pointless sentence or two I just wrote out. Bleh.

Anyway, I'm just absurdly happy, don't know why, but I am.
I hope you find new inspirations and such so you can continue -- t'would be sadness if not for your pretty writing ;_;.

Loved everything about this chapter, especially the fine little details that other authors don't write out [a small peeve of mine], and yeah ^^;
Update soon, please and thank you!
person Mizuka
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaa hehe Naruto is soooo cute!! Sasuke sleeping... I´m sure he look adorable!! XDDDDD

Can´t wait for the show!!! Hehe Naruto is a perver!!! XDDDDDDD But a hot blondie perver :3
person jess
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was really good. This chapter was ONE of my favorites. I wonder where Naruto's taking Sasuke, I wonder whats going to happen *gets crazed look*. Update soon or else lol joking ^_^ But yea...update soon 0_0... or else
person Kat
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I haven't reviewed at all previously.. I'm rather lazy at doing so, to be honest.. but since you said you wanted reviews, hey, I'm giving you one! So. Your story is good.. though I can tell you're runnin' down. Not that that's a bad thing, you're just stuck for ideas. I've been there. But I was thinking: when is there going to be action? Not that A story isn't a story without.. well, it isn't, but a good story has to have sex. As long as it's set in proportion to the rest of the plot. Like the story.. Living a lie? Or Spiral Falling? Those were damned good stories, yet they had sex in spots that made sense. The sex didn't interfere with the plot; on the contrary, it added to it.

So that's my two cents, or whatever. Keep it up, love!

Ja.
person SasukeItachiSMex
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;.;...;.; YOU CANT LEAVE IT THERE! Wah. ;.; How utterly cruel of you, missy. In very few stories have I sat there and read through it and then laughed my ass off at parts that attracted the attention.

Oh, it was sooo goood..

And the image of Sasuke with messy hair and pajamas is CUTE. xD And Naruto's statements were all right...

And yes, Sasuke needs to be Naruto's. -Purrs- Oooooooooooooooooooooh, I can't wait. <3
person Sammei
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"You're freaking cute when you sleep, god damn you!" Love it. ^_^ And I seriously am having a memory lapse, cuz I don't remember what show he's talking about.. ahh, so confused. >_> I didn't really like this chapter as compared to the other ones, but it was still good. It felt a little shorter, somehow. I'm not complaining though.. whatever you feel like it. Hehe. Especially with damned classes starting up again.. anyhow, I'm really interested to see where the whole Neji and Tenten thing goes, and who you're going to (maybe?) pair Gaara up with, if anyone. And Orochimaru... :shudder: I was hoping he wouldn't be in this fic. Scary. I would quit if he was my boss. I hope he doesn't try to molest Sasuke. O_O

Looking forward to your next update!