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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Mythyn
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your fic ^^ I can't wait till next chapter ^^ Keep up the great work :D
person -
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no breaks no breaks!!! now is when the actual narusasu will begin, man!!!!!! you can't break here ;_; I'd die!!! you know what we fans have to go thru to read NaruSasu ;_; it's veryyyy rare...and good ones are even rarerrrr :S so keep writing. actually, i liked the previous chapter and this chapter. i hope u are not offended by me saying this, but u shouldnt have posted ur previous version of the chapter along with it. because, in my head, that part left an impression ;_; and when compared to the actual chapter, it was very ooc. but, i lovedddd the chapter! i even loved this one <3 uwahhhh i really wanna know what this horticulture thing's abt...and i wanna know about the Commons show... fufufu interestingggg..lol but uwahhhhhhhh i can't believeeeeee that sasuke works for oro ;_; that just makes me wanna cryyyy!!! grrrr stupid oro that perverted bastard lol. and and and...thanks for making naruto so innocent towards the end! i loved it when he said "it was hard not to" - tho I don't find sasuke cute at all (yes, i am a sasuke hater ;_; but i still pair him up with naruto - whom i love the most) the innocence and hotness factor of naruto went up like 50 times. I mean, wow ^^ and I felt happy for Sasuke. I wish Naruto had come out and told him that he'd kissed him so that the bet between the trio would be over and sasuke could gloat LOL but then...that'd make naruto upset cause he'd think he's pretending to love naruto because of a silly bet or competition between them. anywayyyyyy~ i love it. your writing is awesome as always :) don't let the inspiration die. but if u need time to think of ideas or something take ur time (but not TOO much ;_; we don't want u to become a missing author or something...) anyway :) good job
person Amy_sama
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't give up! Things are just getting good;) I'm enjoying this AU story. I'm a tradionalist at heart and prefer N/S pairings in yaoi. I've read this all in one sitting and want more. Keep going!
person -
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well ;_; this is the reason i don't write reviews that often: cause aff.net hates my beautiful reviews.
anyway ;_; i'm too sleepy to rewrite, so just know that naruto rules all ;D and i love the innocence that u gave naruto in this chapter - like when he said "it was hard not to" - that was just way sweet. increased sweetness and hotness factor 50 times over lol :P
person ally2002
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! a blushing sasuke! that's great! this is one of my favorite fics. please keep writing.
person Puchu
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mwaaaaaah~~! don't stoooopppp~~!!! TT__TT I want to read more~! more! more!!! soon!! please, please, more! gimme more!!! more droolable, lovely, lot, smexy, cute fic!

amazing chapter, amazing fic. keep up the great work, and keep it up soon, ya hear!! ^^;
person nekopooya
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have I ever tell you, that I love Chasing Naruto more than my life? *smile*
person Shadowkid
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice... Pretty short, when compared to previous chapters, but nice nonetheless. Don't even think of quitting Chasing Naruto, or I'll personally nurder you in your sleep. wait... No, I'll kidnapp you and force you to write more. [maniacal laughter]

*shoots magical beam of inspiration*
person Kel
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha! Btw, dun stop half way, ur fic is so cool.
person kaze
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has become one of my favorite AU's, and I was SO stoked to see a new chapter up. I love where the story is going, and I adore the relationship development between Naruto and Sasuke. Please keep this fic going...I think I would DIE if you didn't! ^_^