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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gawds, you're an amazing writer! I love your plot and how the characters are developing.
Will Neji and Tenten develop a closer relationship? I hope so. Their current relationship is funny, what with all the arguing and stuff. Don't stop writing!
Will Neji and Tenten develop a closer relationship? I hope so. Their current relationship is funny, what with all the arguing and stuff. Don't stop writing!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, things usually are akward when a relationship transforms into something deeper and more intimate. It's like stepping on ice, you never know if it's thick enough, right?
Right now I can't wait for the next chapter!! Will they finally get closer?! I hope so!!!!!
And what about Gaara? Neji found himself a girl but our sweet, adorable, lonely Gaara, what will happen with him?
Update soon!
Right now I can't wait for the next chapter!! Will they finally get closer?! I hope so!!!!!
And what about Gaara? Neji found himself a girl but our sweet, adorable, lonely Gaara, what will happen with him?
Update soon!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I was meaning to review when I read the last chapter, and forgot too...sorry. I really like the story. At first, I wasn't sure about having Neji and Gaara like Naruto too. Most of the stories that I've read, have Neji, Gaara, and Sasuke liking Naruto and it gets 'old'- if you will. But, your story is different somehow...not sure how though. I can't wait to see what happens between Naruto and Sasuke.
Later.
I was meaning to review when I read the last chapter, and forgot too...sorry. I really like the story. At first, I wasn't sure about having Neji and Gaara like Naruto too. Most of the stories that I've read, have Neji, Gaara, and Sasuke liking Naruto and it gets 'old'- if you will. But, your story is different somehow...not sure how though. I can't wait to see what happens between Naruto and Sasuke.
Later.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Curse you! Leaving me so in the dark like this! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN, DARN IT! But I loved the chapter, really.
You are fantastically wonderful!
You are fantastically wonderful!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh heh...^_^ I agree, it's not my favorite chapter...but Sasuke is just oh-so-keyoote with his pretzels...and Tenten totally rocks!!! ^_~ You better make her and Neji end up together! Of course you will! How can we leave poor Neji alone? Adding to the fact, Tenten is the perfect girl for him! Naruto shouldn't be his type...too much drama. Tenten is much more cut-to-the-chase, in a typical, perfect lawyer fashion.
Now, Gaara...*sigh* -_-;; He will unfortunatelly grow old alone. That is, if he doesn't die at a young age. I can see him dying in a freak scuba trip, though...he got chomped on by a shark...that'd be his perfect death. Or crushed by waves while surfing. I can't see him getting in a car accident or falling out of a plane or committing suicide.
Damn, I'm morbid! ^_~ and don't I like it! Anywhoo, I don't think this chappy was half-bad...so don't feel down-in-the-dumpster! Just remember, a frown is a smile upside down, and Naruto spelt backwards is Oturan! ^___^
Now, Gaara...*sigh* -_-;; He will unfortunatelly grow old alone. That is, if he doesn't die at a young age. I can see him dying in a freak scuba trip, though...he got chomped on by a shark...that'd be his perfect death. Or crushed by waves while surfing. I can't see him getting in a car accident or falling out of a plane or committing suicide.
Damn, I'm morbid! ^_~ and don't I like it! Anywhoo, I don't think this chappy was half-bad...so don't feel down-in-the-dumpster! Just remember, a frown is a smile upside down, and Naruto spelt backwards is Oturan! ^___^
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah! another chapter..i really like the blushing Naruto..he's sooooo cute..i like how Sasuke is teasing him. i like how Neiji is slowly being eased out of the picture with TenTen. keep up the great work!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't been reveiwing because I'm terribly lazy. I'm sorry. I haven't been dissapointed at all with the updates what so ever, I think they are just as brilliant as usual. It's slow moving but I like that.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If reviews are what you want, then review I shall. <33333 This is my favourite story at the moment, and I can't wait for the next chapter. <33333 May NaruSasu/SasuNaru reign forever~! <33333333333333333333333333
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... My entire message was cut off because I hearted the end of the first sentence. I feel sad. :( Well, I'm not typing the whole thing over again, so in summary: I luff this story to bits and pieces and this chapter was no exception. ^^
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see the story continue after your vacation.
I love this story with all its twists and the chasing around!
I'm still wondering what Naruto's hiding from everyone...
When you find your inspiration building again - please definitely continue writing CN.
I love this story with all its twists and the chasing around!
I'm still wondering what Naruto's hiding from everyone...
When you find your inspiration building again - please definitely continue writing CN.