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God I love this story. I can't see what happens. Update soon I'm on the edge of my seat.

luv
Ravyn

ps. Sorry about the super short review. I just got off work and I frickn tired. I leave a nice long review next chapter K? So update asap. ;P

Hee heee hee. I wish I was standing next to Sasuke to see the look on Gaara's face. LOL. I wonder what Naruto's working on...hmmm. I'm also wonder what Naruto's going to do to Sasuke on their date. Hee hee. I can't wait to find out. ^_^

NO! Whatever I can do to keep you interested in this fic I WILL DO! I had to wait for months for more! Please don't deprive me of it again! You have one of the best characterizations of all the characters. I love how you keep them the way they are, but you don't try to transpose everything that happens in the real storyline into this time and world. Plus I am a HUGE narusasu fan, but I find more sasunaru fics out there. You have always kept me interested in the story and with this number of long chapters, that is hard to do. This is my FAVORITE fic on adultfan right now! Granted, reading more from you is good, but I'd really like to continue reading this one on a fairly regular basis until it is done. However, if you think it is a choice of not very good chapters or a break, then I vote for the break. Thanks!

NOO!! dont give up... this is my favourite story!! i check for updates all the time even thou i have alerts from ff so i know that im wasting my time but i get so excited that i want to know whats going to happen!! i know what lack of inspiration is like though, but CN has so many little things that keep cropping up that really anything could happen next so you can include ANYTHING and arent stuck to a strict story plan. thats what i always do - over detail each part of my story so that when it comes to actually writing it, ive got bored and move onto a new idea but i am going to try to stick to one thing now as im attempting my first naruto fic.

still, even if you do leave CN for a bit and write some other stuff to clear your head, im sure it'll still be just as good and i'll be reading it, as long as you dont abandon CN, as then i might cry!!

Excellent! As always ^^ The chapter really got me curious about what Naruto really is doing and it gets me so damn frustrated to know when both guys are gonna spill their feelings for each other! (In a good way of frustration! ^^;;) But yet, even though I want to know when they'll confess, I bet that's the time when the fic finishes and ends, ne? So...keep making more chapters! lol The more teasing, the better! This chapter is really great, it's still good! I hope you'll get your inspiration back, til next time!

-Elk

Okay. I am still impressed by the way you have managed to create an atmosphere of reality. The characters seem to have grown up 'in character'. Authors who overdo their work and then blame it on growth always frustrate me. Some things just don't fit, no matter how you grow up.
Now, I only found one thing that bothered me, and I doubt anyone else will care. But, as I currently derive my income from a job at the aforementioned SuperWal*Mart. I find it necessary to inform you that the call over the P.A. would have been for "An associate to the Lawn and Garden department for Customer assistance". See what I mean? I doubt it is worth editing.
Great job and keep it up. I look forward to the next chapter with relish, and mustard too.

OMG!! Please write more!!! *weep* I really like reading this story since it's so good and I wanna know what happens! XD It's great!

Ohh, nice transition chapter. There are so many things that I am curious about...what is Naruto doing? I know he is working for Tsunade but what, it is going to be very interesting when you uncover it.

Sasuke has won the bet and the poor thing doesn't even know it XD, I like that. I like the slow dance they perform as their relationship evolves. All the teasing, all the feelings will pay off later as long as people don't get in the way (and we know how interesting misunderstandings make everything).

If you need a break from writing the fic, you should take it, even if it will make us readers sad (I know I will be) but burning out is never good and if you need the time, take it. Usually a fresh eye to a work works well.

Good luck and as usual, I can't wait to see the rest.

*sniggers* ......Sasuke........pretzles............. *dies laughing* OMG!!! How awesome is that??? XDDDD I wonder if he'd like dark chocolate covered pretzles, hm? Dark chocolate isn't TOO sweet, and with the salt on the pretzle.......... ^___~ Very cute/intriguing chapter, even it it was only a transition. I can't wait for the "show" "tomorrow night", lol. Keep up the good work!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!

Both of your stories were good. I really what to know what happens next. Please update soon.