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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Myuki-chan
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
D: What is Naruto doing with all the gardening stuff~? XD Will we find out soon?
And what show?! XD
It seems Neji just /might/ be out of the running after that quote from Tenten but... Gaara still seems to be determined.
I love your story~ There's no way I'm ditching it because I have to know how it ends. O___O And it always makes me so happy to read your fics XD
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So tired...Last bit of filler, I swear.
person lo
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that chapter, but I ahev enjoyed all of the chapteres. I love the interaction between the characters, I love it how thier personalities come out and just mesh so well. This story is great!!! I can't wait to see what you do with the rest of it. Keep up the great work.
person Cereal
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this for some time, and I LOVE it <33 Although, basically it's just the Naruto characters in a university setting, right? Anyways, keep working on it!
person Cereal
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, my review got cut off. Sorry! Basically, I wanted to say was that it was interesting how Sasuke and Naruto's relationship grew, and how Tenten entered. Pre-law suits her so well. Anyways, keep on writing!
person vashta
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering, how much longer is this going to be? I really like it and am thouroughly happy for new chaps, but I am ready to move ahead. Ok, I don't want to be a complainer. I am enjoying this and think that you are a very good Author.
person MiyaJadecube
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Teehee...what a pair. XD Well first time reviewer...but thats becuase I only just found this little jem. Boy, where have I been? >< Anyway, great work here...I especially am enjoying your newest chappy...woot! Bring in the TenTen...kick-butt girls...well...kick butt...o_< I'm kinda wondering what role she will be playing in the future of this story...*coughloveinterest* And can I be a fangirl and say, 'Squeee! NaruxSasu! Kawaii no desu?!' ^_^ I'm glad you did the rewrite in this chappy as well, like others have said, although I agree that the 'ooc Sasuke' was just too darn funny. XD But...*sniffles* they were just too darn cute in bed. v_v I'm such a fangirl at heart....

Keep up the glompable work Akai-san! *bows*

~MIYA
person Metranome
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually rather thought the first draft of your story was much better. I didn't think Sasuke was noticably out of character at all. And the rewrite cut off at such an inconclusive point....That's going to confuse a few people. Anyway, good work on this chapter, and I hope to see more in the near future. :)
person Kali S.
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haHA! Tenten makes her appearance!!!!! ^_^ I just love that girl...she's the perfect match for Neji, in my opinion. And the perfect thing so that he leaves Naruto alone! God, Naruto and Sasuke are so cute together...Sasuke-kun's like a little kid when he's half asleep *giggle*.
person TeenBulma
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha chapter 17 is the best! Im SO glad you rewrote it because you thought sasuke was OOC, because i like the rewritten part ALOT :D I can't wait to see what happens next!! <3