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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person ~aki~
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uwaahhh.. II LLOOVVEE this CHATER!!! omg golly they are so kawaii!! ^^, this is what i'm waiting for!!! the pov of naruto!! wahehehe omg i hope that sasuke can say what he feels already.. but anywei irelly like naruto's thoughts!!! you really made my day!!! your story is so awesome.. i hope you keep it up!!Ü thanks!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeeee!!! *glomps you* You updated!!! Yippeeeeeeeee!!! ^^ Absolutely wonderful chapter, as always -- I can't wait to see where Neji's and Ten-Ten's "relationship" goes, as well as the Kiba/Hinata one and who you choose for Gaara........ Oh, and let's not forget about what will happen between Naruto and Sasuke when they wake up together... and hopefully in a compromising position of some sort, lol! ^___~ Keep up the good work, and thanks again for the update! *random chocolate giving* Ja ne!!!
person Leasan
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To begin with: I definitely prefer the final version.
Apart from that: I LOOOVE this chapter!!!
That Sasu/Naru bedroom talk is so thrilling!
And will Naruto finally take care of Sasuke, I mean "properly"? Like a kiss in a public place to begin with?? :)
And Neji finding a possible new crush is a wonderful idea!! Especially lippy TenTen :)
Update asap, at least soooner than last time, pleeeease!
person AleGnA
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so great! Just wondering and all, are you going to further explain Sasuke and Naruto's past like you did with Neji and Gaara? A few of the little tiny comments in some chapters have me curious as to what their past was like. I like the interaction between Neji and TenTen. That was great! As always, the Naru/Sasu interaction is awesome! Keep up the good work and write more soon! This fic rox my sox!
person Puchu
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
myaaaaaah~! sooo kawaii~~!!! please write more soon~!!

...and the most annoying thing is that Naruto kissed Sasuke, he won the bet, AND HE WAS ASLEEP SO HE DOESN'T KNOW IT~~!! ARGH!!! SO CRUELLLL~~~!!!! TT___TT *bawls her eyes out*

amazing chapter~! please continue soon! (and that's the end of this pretty pointless review. sorry... ^^;; )
person Myuki-chan
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so incredibly cute XD
AND SASUKE WON HAHA ...only he doesn't know that, does he? XD Damn you Sasuke, why must you be so stubborn? Just say it already lol XD
And I agree, that first draft is a bit ooc for Sasuke but too funny to get rid of XD
person nicole
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad you finally updated plz continue
person Ketsi
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic makes me laugh, is makes me go 'awwww', it's everything a good fic should be. Sasuke is perfect, naruto is perfect......*goes on for hours over how great it is*

I'd love to get updates on this fic...
person Lazuli
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!

So ... close.... soooo very very close. *thwaps both Sasuke and Naruto for their thick-headness and gives Sasuke an extra whap for his pride.

^_^ Loved the chapter, look forward to more. The way you capture humor and seriousness and just the way you write is simply fun. ^_^ Can't wait to see the next part!
person fyredevyl
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, another great chapter, as usual. I'm so glad you used the "I smell smoke" comment. I used that before (on icaf conf.) and no one got it. I'm glad there's someone else outside my family that gets it.
This was a cute chapter. I like your Tenten, she's not so crazy for Neji. Yay! And when Naruto kissed Sasuke, I kept chanting, "He won the bet. He won the bet." BUT HE DOESN'T KNOW!!!! I keep thinking there will be a fight towards the end where either Neji or Gaara gets kissed by Naruto and Naruto finds out and bursts all their bubbles (except Sasuke's) by saying that he kissed Sasuke first. I could just see that coming.
Keep up the good work.