rate_review Reviews

Extra-long, I know.

Great chapter. Though it might not be a bad idea to start thinking of ending it. This is a great story, and I do not want to see it piddle out. Keep up the good work. I hope to see other ideas from you. I like the way your mind works.

Oh, wow. I like Ten Ten a lot. It's so rare to find good, strong female characters in stories with yaoi. I love yaoi very much, but it does sadden me to see how badly the female population is represented sometimes. So I'm glad you rewrote the chapter with her in it. The first version was funny, but Naurto waking up in the night in Sasuke's bed was so cute. Jeez, I love your story, can't wait for more.

I wish you best of luck with school starting and all. It's the same for me, actually, but I don't have a brilliant mind to write something [and thus continuously update XD]!

Mm... I really liked this chapter ^^. It was cute and your humor never ceased to amuse me XD Wee! The appearance of Ten-Ten rocked; she's cool, made some Neji!action, and all that good stuff.

Hm, whoa, I suck at reviews.
Erm... anyway!

I hope you update soon [and enjoy the last of your summer holidays], please and thank you ^^!

Hey, that's really great!
I have just finished reading chapter 16. It was surprising that Kiba and Hinata together thing but I enjoyed it. I am enyojing the tension between characters too but perhaps you keep the tension for too much time. It's growning frustating, sometimes I have to remind myself this is just a story becausa otherwise I'd scream ' YOU GUYS GET THE FUCK TOOOOOGETHER' But I suppose the tension makes it more...interesting. Anyway, you could release it a little, couldn't you?
Well Ok, thanks for writting this and UPDATE SOON!

*tackles my girl!* Yo *winks and smirks* Tis been a while since i last reviewed so i thought I'd give my girl some props for writing one of the best Naruto fics out there...you're so in the top..like 5...or 3...hell i dunno lol All I know is you and Ali rock and I love reading both of your stories ^__^

But anywho, soooo glad you're back! well....now you're back in MI, but same diff lol poor poor thing not havin net until monday *cries with you!* T__T

*cough* ok maybe i should say something about the fic....hmm....what is there really to say? lol It's great..but you knew that...it's hilarious...you knew that too....umm...sweet...yeah that is obvious...ermm...it just kicks major ass and I hate it that I still can't figure out what naruto is up to! *cries by myself while you laugh maliciously* *sigh* ah well...one day it might actually hit me...*the day i reread all the chapters :p *

anywho, i hope school doesn't slow down ur writing and you keep pumpin out those chaps! cuz, babe, you're like a drug, i just gotta have more of you...*cough* the fic, i mean the fic!

Houseki

I like how you keep useing "THE Uchiha" I don;t know why but it amuses me <3

so cuuuute~~~! please write more soon! or I will die! T__T I'm officially addicted to this fic.. *sniffle* I'll be getting all shaky and incoherent (more than usual) if you don't write more soon! UPDAAAA~TE! *dies*

Okay I've finally caught up and I 'd like to say I love this fic. I have come to terms that this is a Narusuke fic, but I like the fact it won't be easy for either Naruto or Sasuke. I like the bad stories of Neji and Gaara too, I feel bad that neither will get Naruto, so I hope Sasuke REALLY proves himself worthy. I have to admit, you've given me a new level of appreciation to Gaara. I never thought he could seductive! Great job there. Can't wait til you update again. And also great part at giving Naruto his faults too. Scary movies, who would have guessed!

I like this... very much in fact, though i was a little thrown off guard by the spacing in the beginning

I definitely want to know when you next update