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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay you've updated!! I like how you relate naruto to gaara's past, very bitter-sweet =D aww when will sasuke ever say he'll like naruto *_* and wad is naruto doing in his spare time? potting plants? :D it's a bit short, this chapter, without encounters from neji XD more happenings for sasuke please!! and gaara!! see u around soon!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigod. i almost died laughing. i read the whole thing in one day. i especialy like the way you put in the horse's thoughts in the chapter where naruto and sasuke went for that trip. i love the way you change points of view too. this is a really well thought-out story. good job!! i hope you update sooner. i am suffering jet lag too. (spent 2 months in russia) you went to japan?? no fair!! i wanna go too. lol. anywhay, good job, i hope to see an update soon.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! soooo happy you're back, soooo happy there's more cn, soooo jealous of your trip to japan and all the bishi guys you got to ogle.... *glomps* anyway, another awesome couple of updates, can't wait for more!! you know nic teases me everytime she gets to read more, so i can't stand not to read up'ds for too long.... anyway, naruto scared of scary movies? clinging to sasuke? loooooved it ^____^ but, awwwww, now we've seen how gaara feels and why and damn girl, playin the heart strings :p and wtf is naruto's project?? aaaahhh it nags at me!! ah, can't wait for more, hope your move back into the dorms was smooth and school starting goes well
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes! sasunaru moments :D i'd kill for some more narusasu moments tho...fuweeeeee~ what did u mean by the ruler thing tho? i don't get it hmm...size comparison??? that's the only thing I could get out of it. But in the fic, naruto said "remove your pride and joy" so that couldn't be it...*goes and thinks abt it* nice writing style as always.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY, I was able to sit down and read the entire thing! Whew....and still no action...although I haven't read the side story yet. But anyway, this is an awesome story. That dream sequence in ch. 12 was EVIL! I so thought that was real! And the trial ride was hilarious. I was rolling on the floor laughing. It brought back memories of my first time riding and just how sore I was. Although most of my soreness came the day after. Made me so happy. *sniff, wipes tear away*
Moving on....I love your style of writing. It's great! There are like no spelling or grammatical errors in any of your chapters which is a feat in and of itself. Your characterization is great and I don't think any of them are too OOC. The only thing I would wish for would be for Sasuke to wake up and tell Naruto how he feels, but that would speed things up and end his torture and he's way too much of a prick in the anime to be given a reprieve. ;)
I'm looking forward to your next chapter and feel free to add me to your mailing list or whatever. I forget if you wanted us to email u directly. Also I would love to hear about your time in Japan. I'm so jealous! I want to go!
Great job!
Cheers!
Moving on....I love your style of writing. It's great! There are like no spelling or grammatical errors in any of your chapters which is a feat in and of itself. Your characterization is great and I don't think any of them are too OOC. The only thing I would wish for would be for Sasuke to wake up and tell Naruto how he feels, but that would speed things up and end his torture and he's way too much of a prick in the anime to be given a reprieve. ;)
I'm looking forward to your next chapter and feel free to add me to your mailing list or whatever. I forget if you wanted us to email u directly. Also I would love to hear about your time in Japan. I'm so jealous! I want to go!
Great job!
Cheers!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto gets what's coming to him? How very innnnnteresting. ^_^ I'm a total fan of NaruSasu, but.. this chapter... aw, can't he be with Gaara, too?! >_> It's really sad what happened to him. Way to make me sympathize with the underdog! ^_^
...and I hate scary movies, too. I can't wait to see how Sasuke torments him with that information. ^_^
Looking forward to your next update
...and I hate scary movies, too. I can't wait to see how Sasuke torments him with that information. ^_^
Looking forward to your next update
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I have been reading this wonderful fic for sometime now and I must say that it is a personal favorite. The character interactions are great. I don't know whether you will consider this (or if I even spelled whether right) but I kinda was wondering about Sasukes background. Where is his family through this becasue I think most of the other characters family situations have been at least touched upon but not his really. Does Naruto know about Sasukes family or does the family situation mean anthing really. I was just wondering about that. Another interesting thing you might consider writting about is (since it seems that they all appear to have gone to the same school at the same time) is Neji or Gaaras point of view of Sasuke and Narutos freindship/relationship. I'm sure they saw something way before the two even realized it. Just things that you haven't really looked into much that you might consider going into, if the next chapters haven't already been written and planned. Keep on Keeping on!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story could you email me at scott1000@verizon.ne when you update thanks
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
Wooohoo... Another great chapter. Nice litter sidestory about Gaara but to be honest I'm not a big fan of Gaara so euphoric or sad about it like some others.
The cinema scene was hilarious. Who thought both of them were such "crybabies" regarding such ordinary things like horror movies or horses :)
Whenever they will visit me (hey, it's allowed to dream, isn't it :D ) I think I'm going to invite them to a horror movie and we will go there by horse :D Just to torture them and then invite them to a steak house... Bah, I babble stupid things :)
However I like your story very much and I beg you not to stop writing!
By the way: What the hell is a studmuffin?
Ciao,
Nathaniel
Wooohoo... Another great chapter. Nice litter sidestory about Gaara but to be honest I'm not a big fan of Gaara so euphoric or sad about it like some others.
The cinema scene was hilarious. Who thought both of them were such "crybabies" regarding such ordinary things like horror movies or horses :)
Whenever they will visit me (hey, it's allowed to dream, isn't it :D ) I think I'm going to invite them to a horror movie and we will go there by horse :D Just to torture them and then invite them to a steak house... Bah, I babble stupid things :)
However I like your story very much and I beg you not to stop writing!
By the way: What the hell is a studmuffin?
Ciao,
Nathaniel