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by megladon129

person dAni3Lr
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
welcome back!!!! argh~~~ it's very short~~~ >.< Neji's words are making me laugh - "You take my breathe away, Uzumaki" and the way he thought when naruto's hands was touching his ribs was like "WOW! *_*" very little abt gaara though... and sasuke XD i wanna noe wad he'll do~~ pls keep it up and tell more!! XD
person Nakuo Shiatsu
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love yur story. Unlike most of the ones I read on here, it's easy to both follow and imagine-plus the time you take to write things from various pov's is priceless. You have officially made your way into my top three favortie authors, and that is a great accomplishment. I hope to read more soon and I wish you good luck in all of your tidings.
person Greenie
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
I just have to get around to finally reviewing this! I wanted to wait until you got back before I did!
I have to say that I absolutely adore this fic! It has to be my favorite! It was after reading this one that I finally
got off my lazy butt, made an account here and posted my own Naruto AU fic!
You inspired me and I must thank you prufusely for it! So... Thank you! *bows*
I like your style of writing, though sometimes it can get just a teensy bit confusing, I can usually figure it out and
chalk it up to my being french as the reason i didn't understand at first.
I really like the plot, though I have some questions, which I'm sure you'll answer in due time.
However, there is one thing that has been plaguing me through out the entire thing...
What happened to Sasuke's job? Does he not... Go to it anymore?
Did he get fired or something? It's just it hasn't been mentioned except for one time and he's never gone again.
I t was just making me curious!
Neways, Just thought you'd like to know that I adore this fic and your like... My Naruto fic idol now! ^^ So yeah, until next chapter!

~Greenie
person Azamaria-chan
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YAY! You're back! *grins* Hope you have a good time! Hehe. Anywhoooo, I'm too tired to give a real review right now. :P Reading waaaaaaay too much fics for today. hehe. Well, glad to see that you're back! Til next chapter! :D
person Amene
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. O__o. Your way of writing is absolute good. ^^ I'm almost jealous about it xDDD
I think that Naruto in this story is fantastic ^^ And Sasuke too. (I think Gaara and Neji too, even thought I would like to pair them to eachs others xDDDD Not to Naruto. Hmph ^.-)

I went crazy when I noticed you had updated xDDD And I told to my friend and she got crazy too x)
I didn't notice any mistakes is spelling (I didn't look for them thought..) and just can't wait till the next chapter ^______^

person Imseniorbagofcrap
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes today is a great day! I have been waiting all summer for the continuation of this fic! You are one of my favorite NaruxSasu writters and this fic holds a special place in my hearts of one of the few multi-chapter fanfictions that managed to never loose its steam and stay fresh. This is one of the best fic's out there and I anxiously awaite the coming chapters and eventual finish. Glad to have you back!
person Ciel
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waited a heluva long time for this chapter but twas worth it. nice piece of work. hurry and update!!
person coriander
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter. Glad to have you back. I'm jealous u got to have a fun filled summer lol. Hope you had lots of fun!!
person ~aki~
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope that you'll put more sasukenaru scenes!!! but all in all i like your story!! so keep it up!!Ü
person Jena
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!! Yay for more of Naruto's point of view, even though we're still somewhat wondering just what he is really planning....or not planning. Heh, poor Sasuke. Not even listening to his own subconscious, but he came very close to admitting to himself that he loves Naruto, hopefully he'll take that step soon. Later! ^_^