schedule
February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MUAHAHAH! NEW UPDATE!!! XD Almost fell over meh chair when I saw the new chapter. >.o You better keep writing after this is over! XDDDD <333
schedule
February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved keep it . um do you have your epilouge typed down yet, just wondering.Update soon!
schedule
January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant Story. Brilliant Writings. Brilliant Author.
Well, I think that are things you already know...XD
Actually, there is a question I've wanted to ask about the story after reading the memories of Sasuke (though couldn't find time to ask it til now....*drop*) and that is:
Their house was burnt down right? And his parents were caught in the flame, too and therefore burnt to death. But why were there 'blood everywhere then?
(Ok, I know of the possibility of something in the room having crushed them or something, but... Well, I think I still keep to the image that Itachi slaughtered them all, cuz angsty-psychotic!Uchihas are just the most appealing for me. Hoho. XD)
Love your story all the same and hope you'll update soon. (And write more NaruSasu fics after finishing this one. XP)
Well, I think that are things you already know...XD
Actually, there is a question I've wanted to ask about the story after reading the memories of Sasuke (though couldn't find time to ask it til now....*drop*) and that is:
Their house was burnt down right? And his parents were caught in the flame, too and therefore burnt to death. But why were there 'blood everywhere then?
(Ok, I know of the possibility of something in the room having crushed them or something, but... Well, I think I still keep to the image that Itachi slaughtered them all, cuz angsty-psychotic!Uchihas are just the most appealing for me. Hoho. XD)
Love your story all the same and hope you'll update soon. (And write more NaruSasu fics after finishing this one. XP)
schedule
January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was actually a really, really good fic. Not only was it AU, but it was college. I actually managed to read a 22 chapter college fic. The hell did you do to me?!?
The music thing--Naruto didn't have to have such shit music taste!--and...occasional dialogue things bothered me, plus the thing about Naruto being obsessed with his body--he never gave a shit about looks--got on my nerves, but it was splendidly written. I've actually been avoiding this fic, having heard it's praise, seen it as a 22 chapter college fic, and hated it, but I regret it. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
The music thing--Naruto didn't have to have such shit music taste!--and...occasional dialogue things bothered me, plus the thing about Naruto being obsessed with his body--he never gave a shit about looks--got on my nerves, but it was splendidly written. I've actually been avoiding this fic, having heard it's praise, seen it as a 22 chapter college fic, and hated it, but I regret it. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
schedule
January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“We bet on who could get you to kiss him first, Naruto.” Three pairs of eyes swung over to Gaara, who, to his credit, didn’t flinch. “If you kissed one of the three of us, the other two had to back off.”
Since Naruto didnt know that Gaara initiated the bet, why would his eyes swing to Gaara, it should only be two pairs of eyes. Anyways, just felt like saying that, i have no other complaints, i really like this story and i am a great NaruSasu fan, not that i mind sasunaru, but they make Naruto so "gurly" and its infurianting since we all know Naruto is SEME! U keep the characters true to themselves, and added a touch of flirtatous Naruto..which is just totally awesome, i hope u update soon.
awesome
Since Naruto didnt know that Gaara initiated the bet, why would his eyes swing to Gaara, it should only be two pairs of eyes. Anyways, just felt like saying that, i have no other complaints, i really like this story and i am a great NaruSasu fan, not that i mind sasunaru, but they make Naruto so "gurly" and its infurianting since we all know Naruto is SEME! U keep the characters true to themselves, and added a touch of flirtatous Naruto..which is just totally awesome, i hope u update soon.
awesome
schedule
January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great plot and its nice that you have a chase and dont get into the naughty too soon...I luv gaara in this and everyone else. Even though they're AU they fit into the story line
schedule
January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.
That's it, just... wow
That's it, just... wow
schedule
January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow....I;m wrapped. This is so different to many of the others out there, I'm glued and impressed. I love the real life insercurities and living styles. Please email me when you update. Kate_kit15@hotmail.com
schedule
January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such an AWESOME fanfic! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! You're an awesome writer, and this was so well written! I can't wait for the next chapter! I wanna see what happens. And then it's the Eprolouge(I can't spell) and then it's over, right? That means I can re-read it over and over again whenever I'm bored and want something good to read! Whee! ^^
schedule
January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this story! And the effect is even better when I'm listening to 'cold' by Crossfade while I'm reading this story!!! No wonder you have so many reviews! And all your chapters are so long! This story is awesome and I can't wait for your next chapter!!! It's really touching and sweet and I'll be damned if anyone doesn't like it! Even if they're not into M/M or Naruto! I am a true fan of this story! ^_________^ Update soon!!!!! Thankyou for starting this story in the first place!