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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TA! Time for a review by...mrow? hehe ME! *ahem* okies anyways! The boys are back at school and now we got all the drama back from all the other boys! and wooo *fans self off* it got a bit heated in the locker room huh? ai yi yi!! Bad Naru for even thinkin of goin after Gaara!! I mean, I know I would, but NO NO NO NOT YOU!! You must go after Sask cuz he is ur true love or some sappy shit like that muwahaha! lol yeah seriously have NO CLUE where that came from
but eh anywho, you KNOW I love your fic and this chap was just sooooo damn good and i was soooo damn sad to finish readin it cuz i knew it'd be 2 whole freaking months until you'd be back!!!! *whimpers* I'ma miss youuuuuuuuuu!! *cries* don't leeeeeeeeeave!!! *sigh* japan is japan though i would still go even if i was being begged by a couple fangirls of ur fic either hehe well, just remember we'll all be here waiting for you!! And i'm SOOOO glad that we have had the chance to become friends and for the next two months i'll have our lil memories to think about and we'll start some new ones in august, got it?! hehe...mmmmm sasusage *smirks* better get that journal up and runnin as soon as u get there! lol hey you could even start while ON the plane! HA! Good idea! Houseki is full of good idea, no? hehe alright, babe, i'm gonna miss you, you be careful, hope u have a GREAT time, and i'll see you when you get back!! Matane na no da!!! Ja!! *huggles glomps and kisses!!!!*
but eh anywho, you KNOW I love your fic and this chap was just sooooo damn good and i was soooo damn sad to finish readin it cuz i knew it'd be 2 whole freaking months until you'd be back!!!! *whimpers* I'ma miss youuuuuuuuuu!! *cries* don't leeeeeeeeeave!!! *sigh* japan is japan though i would still go even if i was being begged by a couple fangirls of ur fic either hehe well, just remember we'll all be here waiting for you!! And i'm SOOOO glad that we have had the chance to become friends and for the next two months i'll have our lil memories to think about and we'll start some new ones in august, got it?! hehe...mmmmm sasusage *smirks* better get that journal up and runnin as soon as u get there! lol hey you could even start while ON the plane! HA! Good idea! Houseki is full of good idea, no? hehe alright, babe, i'm gonna miss you, you be careful, hope u have a GREAT time, and i'll see you when you get back!! Matane na no da!!! Ja!! *huggles glomps and kisses!!!!*
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yokatta~! SasuNaru~! ^____^ *dances*
Have fun in Japan! It rocks! Oh, and if you get to talk to some japanese people, be prepared for a MAJOR ego boost... I've been here for... two months and... *counts* 6 days, and I think I've heard more compliments than in my whole 17 years+ long life before that....
Seriously, it's AMAZING what they can compliment you on... They especially seem to like my white skin.... Which is what I back home would have called "winter pale"....
Oh well, enough about Japan. GREAT STORY! GREAT CHAPPIE~! Can't wait to read more!
Have fun in Japan! It rocks! Oh, and if you get to talk to some japanese people, be prepared for a MAJOR ego boost... I've been here for... two months and... *counts* 6 days, and I think I've heard more compliments than in my whole 17 years+ long life before that....
Seriously, it's AMAZING what they can compliment you on... They especially seem to like my white skin.... Which is what I back home would have called "winter pale"....
Oh well, enough about Japan. GREAT STORY! GREAT CHAPPIE~! Can't wait to read more!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT was a great chapter! wow, just when you think one of the boys have naruto, gaara
ust sweeps in from no where and molests naruto. haha. it ACTUALLY surprised me that
sasuke showed up, usually you can tell someone is comig or something. it was funny too
when gaara's mouth twitched which indicated exxtreme humor. i' glad that there isn't this
big break up between naruto and sasuke after tat incident. ma... gaara was so BOLD! and
poor neiji, will he find out about the gaara naruto ting? hee hee. i really enjoyed this chapter.
see you in august! ;_; *weeps* (that's like the end of summer vacation and it hasn't even
started and i know your fic won't be updated =p) well, plenty of time to think of the next
chapters? well, if it were me, i wouldn't even think of my fic and just HAVE FUN! hope you
have fun!
ust sweeps in from no where and molests naruto. haha. it ACTUALLY surprised me that
sasuke showed up, usually you can tell someone is comig or something. it was funny too
when gaara's mouth twitched which indicated exxtreme humor. i' glad that there isn't this
big break up between naruto and sasuke after tat incident. ma... gaara was so BOLD! and
poor neiji, will he find out about the gaara naruto ting? hee hee. i really enjoyed this chapter.
see you in august! ;_; *weeps* (that's like the end of summer vacation and it hasn't even
started and i know your fic won't be updated =p) well, plenty of time to think of the next
chapters? well, if it were me, i wouldn't even think of my fic and just HAVE FUN! hope you
have fun!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 is awesome. Your whole story is awesome. I really like your writing style and how your not rushing the story. I like the way your exploring their emotions and all the funny things that popup. Keep up the great work.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I wish Gaara would do that to me in the lockerroom...heh heh. Now, how to get into the boys' lockerroom, without getting noticed...? :P
Sasuke acts like a worried schoolgirl, btw... and it did look like some kind of 'ending the story here' after I read the chapter.
Ah well, I know you'll write more. You said so yourself. And as one of your million loyal fans, I'll be reading. :D
Have a safe trip to Japan and lots and lots of fun in the Land of the Rising Sun.
Sasuke acts like a worried schoolgirl, btw... and it did look like some kind of 'ending the story here' after I read the chapter.
Ah well, I know you'll write more. You said so yourself. And as one of your million loyal fans, I'll be reading. :D
Have a safe trip to Japan and lots and lots of fun in the Land of the Rising Sun.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad Gaara! Bad Neji!! *chases them both with a stick*
Couldnt help but feel bad for Sasuke there, he always seems to be walking in on Naruto. Hehe. And yes, thanks for reassuring us that this is NaruSasu. I think half of your fans would have gone and tried to hunt you down in Japan if you didnt. But this new development with Gaara is interesting. Its like he jumps Naruto, Naruto gets hot and bothered. Neji jumps Naruto, Naruto is freaked. As an afterthough, I'd like to add that I hope its Neji who gets beaten up. Can't hate Gaara; he's our cute little psycho.
On another note...a couple chapters back you mentioned that Naruto heard that Sasuke was the sort to be with someone for the sex (or for a short amount of time) and then claim that he didnt care about him/her as much as he should. That seems to be in character and everything, but thats made me wonder a bit about your characters. Random things of course, nothing that really matters to your plot. Have they all had sex before? Things like that. See? Doesn't matter. But yeah, me and my perverted self wonders this.
One more and I'll leave you alone. We've seen a good part of the main cast, and I think the way you give Kakashi and the others sort of cameos is good. But, just wondering if some of the "bad guys" will be seen. Like Itachi/Orochimaru. And I'm not saying that all AU fics must follow the same patterns/events as the original either, because I like the way you do things very much. But, you know. Everything is fine without them now, but if you were planning on putting in an "outside" conflict for say Sasuke...Anywho! Guess we'll find out, and have a good trip!
Couldnt help but feel bad for Sasuke there, he always seems to be walking in on Naruto. Hehe. And yes, thanks for reassuring us that this is NaruSasu. I think half of your fans would have gone and tried to hunt you down in Japan if you didnt. But this new development with Gaara is interesting. Its like he jumps Naruto, Naruto gets hot and bothered. Neji jumps Naruto, Naruto is freaked. As an afterthough, I'd like to add that I hope its Neji who gets beaten up. Can't hate Gaara; he's our cute little psycho.
On another note...a couple chapters back you mentioned that Naruto heard that Sasuke was the sort to be with someone for the sex (or for a short amount of time) and then claim that he didnt care about him/her as much as he should. That seems to be in character and everything, but thats made me wonder a bit about your characters. Random things of course, nothing that really matters to your plot. Have they all had sex before? Things like that. See? Doesn't matter. But yeah, me and my perverted self wonders this.
One more and I'll leave you alone. We've seen a good part of the main cast, and I think the way you give Kakashi and the others sort of cameos is good. But, just wondering if some of the "bad guys" will be seen. Like Itachi/Orochimaru. And I'm not saying that all AU fics must follow the same patterns/events as the original either, because I like the way you do things very much. But, you know. Everything is fine without them now, but if you were planning on putting in an "outside" conflict for say Sasuke...Anywho! Guess we'll find out, and have a good trip!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait till you get back to write some more. I'm glad this is going to be a sasunaru fic though, at least I know that. Keep up the goo work see ya in aug.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:Shakes fist: Darn you, Neji! Are you being sincere, or just two-faced so you can get on his good side? I can't tell with you anymore! Hehe. Also, for a minute there, when Gaara kept getting that 'strange glint' in his eyes, I thought that Shuukaku (sp?) would be making an appearance, but this isn't that kind of fic, is it? Geez, he's a pushy one. And poor Sasuke - he must be getting ulcers from all the rage he's experiencing! Hehe. I'm not really sure how I felt about this chapter.. It's not one of my favorites.
Argh, I hope I can last while you're in Japan. >_< Have fun!
Argh, I hope I can last while you're in Japan. >_< Have fun!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I got a little scared with that whole scene in the gym with Gaara. I must way your story does not have any lulls in the plot. I like how you just keep on adding to and molding the story. Keep up the good work!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aawww.....that was sooooo sweet!!! I loved it!!! *huggles her Neji plushie* Poor Neji-kun........ I feel so sorry for him!!! *sniff* ^^ Enjoy your trip, and remember to write ever free minute you have, k? ^___~ LOL, thanks for the great chapter -- keep up the good work!!!