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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person ally2002
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you mean there is going to be a lemon in the next chapter?? yes!!
person -
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn you lol. for making us hold our breaths during that ugly (yes, it was freakin sexy! but i won't ever ever admit it because NaruxGaa = GROSS) scene! gahhh lol Long live NaruSasu. Damn you :P again, for making your writing style so amazing. It's like, the words come out of the screen and become pictures 0.o I can literally imagine all of it, except the yuckyyyyyyyyyyyy scene (i saw it i saw it! it was so cute) (but i imagined it was sasuke 0.o), i mean wow, that's a lot of talent. Hehe. Just make your writing style even more smuttier and you'd become a famous erotica novelist like Ero-sennin lol. And then fans like Kakashi will come up to you :P lol don't you want that? (<-hates Kakashi)
Have fun in Japan!
person Kelly
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gosh... I hate Gaara..
Btw, is this story going to be ended with Naruto liking(he's already liking)/loving Sasuke... Coz.. Oh my Gosh... I start pitying Sasuke.. Hope time flies quickly, so that I can get to see ur updates sooner!!!! OMG! Im dying waiting!!! REMEMBER THIS FANFIC IS GONNA BE NARUSASU.. Not others.. right..?
person macy
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gwaa!! what a cute chapter. i liked the locker scene, hehehe..quite hot.

Heee...i'm pretty glad that this would be a narusasu. I like nejinaru and gaanaru as well, but i just like sasunaru a little more so, yeah...woohoo!!! I hope you have an awesome time in Japan!! Thanks for writing this =)
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to suffer without Chasing Naruto updates. o_o

Enjoy your trip!!
person WhiteLiger
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yah being typical me and getting to lazy to actually log in to reveiw.
Anyways, good chapter. Confusing slightly, but good.
I swear between reading this with the confusingness of Narutos' mind changing so much and dealing with the love triangle of Gravitation T_T My poor, poor brain!

But still definatly good. Gonna miss your updates while your gone. T_T
Darn I know how Naruto feels I have a nasty cold too. But mine is more out of no where and definatly not to blaim on anyone ^^;; poor guy. So confused.
person Gingitsune
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gone for two months?! Argh! What am I going to do without your updates to this fic?! Argh!

Well, for a moment there I thought that this fic might turn out to be a triangle fic, Naruto torn btw Gaara and Sasuke. Hehe now I do know that it's still going to be SasuNaru. Heheh a jealous Sasuke is so adorable!!!! Heheh I loved the part where Naruto just hugs him tight, stopping his rant. Sweet!

More soon I hope *keeping fingers crossed*
person azamaria-chan
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* TWO MONTHS?! NOOOOOOOOO!!! *cries some more*
hope you have a good time! *Grins* I L-O-V-E this fic and will be awaiting your return and the next chapter. The NaruSasu-ness is just getting good too! hehe. I really enjoyed this chapter. It showed more of what Naruto was thinking and how there were the other guys... but i loved how in the end, it's always going to be Sasuke. hehehe.
Anywho. Again, I'll just say, hope you have a good time!
person minjin00
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love this chapter..too bad gaara didnt get anything before the interruption. anyways have fun in japan and cant wait for the update after you're back. :D
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the opening very very very much. Must be the best part of the story so far :D you really know how to push the buttons right, enticing us with all these close calls between the two. Heh... Sasuke acting seductive? i see he had get his thoughts together and forgo his dignity in order to get his hands on naru. thats too good to be true :P sadly naruto is not going to sucumb that easily, especially after he decided not to get involved intimately with sasuke right? doubt his resolution will lasts long too, so i'll be waiting to see how you gonna continue your story with the stage already set for the best! Enjoy your oversea trip anyway and get yrself back quickly cos we will be missing yr story.