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The next chapter is almost entirely from Naruto's pov, so sit tight. ^_^

I *adore* your interactions between Naruto and Sasuke when they get cute (like in this chapter-naruto and the cute sleeping sasuke). Dont get me wrong, smut is right up there too. The piece on Neji was well done! The parts with him thinking during the flashback were very amusing.

I've almost convinced myself that the person Naruto will beat up (if this happens, mind you) will be Sasuke. I wish it were Neji (wouldnt be Gaara...too...little? Hehe). But everytime Naruto kicks someone's ass, he changes their view on life (I think you mentioned before that Naruto beat up Neji once in your 'verse...). I dunno, if you were following a pattern with the manga, Sasuke is the only one whose ass he hasnt kicked yet (true, they fought, but Sasuke kinda won that one).

And on that bet...I my honest opinion, I really don't want Naruto to be all offended and putting up a stink because he was being treated as property (harhar). I mean, he probably will, I just think it would be cliched. *sigh* Ah well, not to say that it will be badly written or anything. You'll find a way to make it work anyway ^_^ Maybe Sasuke finally admitting to Naruto that he loves him will make things all better. *kicks Sasuke* Are you about to go mad because we havent seen him in the season 2 manga yet? I know I am. Probably will look like a mini-Orochimaru, but still. Rawr. Anyway, I always come here to read your chapters, and however you twist Naruto and Sasuke, you've assured us that it will indeed be a smutty NaruSasu (my twisted self prefers Sasuke as uke...) so go nuts! (Now is the part where I look back on this and say "Wow, this was all over the place/random"...)

*pouts* It's still gonna be Sasuke/Naruto right? I like neji and Gaara and all.... but... *cough* welll.... you know..... Heeeheheeheheheheheh. Keep up the awesome writing though! Ja ne!!
Shiroi.

Ah, blame it all on shakespeare. I think this is the first time I've ever seen a rival's position legitamized in a Naruto slash fic. Good job! The romantic in me is almost rooting for Neji now. It makes me kinda sad for him, too.

"Naruto managed to take in the sight of Sasuke, in Naruto’s teddy bear pajamas (he’d always known they’d come in handy some day), curled up against Naruto’s chest." This would make for such a cute picture...to bad I'm not that great at drawing. *pouts*

can't there just be a 4som? that would be a lot more simple, and not to mention, yummy!

Oooooh! Who wouldn't want to wake up to a "naughty" Naruto in the morning?! Ai yi yi! He was givin Sask the works!! Only if he would've kissed him! Sask would've had free reign to do as he pleased! *sigh* Just tell him how you feel Sasuke!!!! lol But yeah their whole bit was just great and poor Sask how embarrassed Naruto kept making him! Ah but that's why we love you! You do so well in making Sask squirm like a worm around Naru which is A-OK with me ^___~

Ah so we see why Neji is obsessed w/ the blonde fox....Hellz I would be too if I had to kiss him over and over and over again...poor Neji though for lookin like a girl..wonder if Sask was there if he would've had to the role instead *smirks* oooh so do we get to hear Gaara's backstory next??? ^_____________^ Hope so!!! and more naru/saskness!! gaah soo much fun!

I'ma cry when you leave!! Just one more?? *sigh* It's almost the end of the month...no fair! You'll be fic-postin like crazy when you get back that's for sure ^__~ Anywho, get that next badboy out here soon! Love ya! Matane na no da!!!

EEEEE!!! The bed scene was so sexy!! Boo to Sakura for interrupting! Ok, so you're making me feel really bad for Neji here. I mean, I'd prefer him over Sasuke, but the way the story's going, I'm gonna say it's a SasuNaru fic. But then, you add that part about how long he's liked Naruto, and nothing's come of it! Be nice to Neji for me k? Maybe he could, I dunno, get with Gaara or something! I just felt so bad for him. It sucks to like someone so long and never have the feelings returned!

Anyway, the fic is going great and I can't wait for the next chapter!! I just want Naruto and Sasuke to get it on already!!

sigh, your fanfiction is addicting, I've just been reading it all again for the past couple hours despite having to be up for work in less than 6 > <. I realized reading through this time how i love a confused Sasuke the way you write him. Because i mean really its obvious in the series that even though he's such a genius he's not exactly thinking clearly most of the time. In light of how many fics have featured naruto as kind of a slut, this is a nice oasis. I think bringing his thoughts out was perfect timing here because it was starting to be really ... not obvious but almost ... that Naruto really did like Sasuke. Plus it gives us that nice added frustration of saying "god sasuke the solution is so simple, what are you doing?!" all in all I'm still completely enthralled by this story and act completely ridiculous when i see that it's updated. thanks for writing it and hope we get to see a little bit more before you head off.

sigh, your fanfiction is addicting, I've just been reading it all again for the past couple hours despite having to be up for work in less than 6. (really have to stop accidently putting those carrots in). I realized reading through this time how i love a confused Sasuke the way you write him. Because i mean really its obvious in the series that even though he's such a genius he's not exactly thinking clearly most of the time. In light of how many fics have featured naruto as kind of a slut, this is a nice oasis. I think bringing his thoughts out was perfect timing here because it was starting to be really ... not obvious but almost ... that Naruto really did like Sasuke. Plus it gives us that nice added frustration of saying "god sasuke the solution is so simple, what are you doing?!" all in all I'm still completely enthralled by this story and act completely ridiculous when i see that it's updated. thanks for writing it and hope we get to see a little bit more before you head off.