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person die sakura die
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i would have to say that i feel sorry for neji- not going anywhere after SEVEN years.. sigh
- _ -.... pooor poor neji.. BUT TOO BAD HAHAHAHAHAHA naru/sasu sexier.. <3 ...when the hell are they gonna get together???- i'll bet narutos gonna be hurt somehow and the 3 boys will have to apologize and naruto will end up choosing sasuke. or -- i put in a different theory... naruto kisses neji/ or gaara- but naruto ends up going back to sasuke who is hurting through all of this. >.>.. ok i'm done theorizing (is that a word.. if its not it is now!!)

ok.. i'll stop now :D GOOD BYE- ty for updating so fast- u never disappoint me ;D
person ARGH DAM THIS (die sakura die)
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok.. most of it got cut off

i would have to say that i feel sorry for neji- not going anywhere after SEVEN years.. sigh
- _ -.... pooor poor neji.. BUT TOO BAD HAHAHAHAHAHA naru/sasu sexier..when the hell are they gonna get together???- i'll bet narutos gonna be hurt somehow and the 3 boys will have to apologize and naruto will end up choosing sasuke. or -- i put in a different theory... naruto kisses neji/ or gaara- but naruto ends up going back to sasuke who is hurting through all of this. >.>.. ok i'm done theorizing (is that a word.. if its not it is now!!)

ok.. i'll stop now :D GOOD BYE- ty for updating so fast- u never disappoint me ;D
person yukiko
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm ... now I see why Neji like him, it's nice.

But Gaara ? maybe more ....
person Yurikai Kurosaki
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOD DAMN STUPID PHONE!!!BAD BAD BAAAAAAAAD TIMING!!!LOL

Naruto finally gets trapped in a corner and Sasuke is slowly getting on top. The tables really did turn, well...for a while I guess..
Oh and the Neji-Naruto Sheakespear flash was rather unexpected! Pretty funny!!
Poor Neji tough. And Gaara too (I wonder what's his story..long time we haven't hear from him..?_?).Still I really do adore them, but right now, I'd kill to have more Naruto-Sasuke!!!!

Admit it already!!!C'mon Sasuke say it, it's not that difficult, 4 words :*I. Love. You. Naruto.*....There you go..see? Told ya it was easy!^^....héhé

" Whatever you write, even tough it gets me frustrated in the end of each chapter (wanna know more!!), I'm in love with your fic!^_______^"
I'm so sad there's only one update left...*soaked puppy eyes*

Well....Go chapter 14!!!

See ya
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another amazing chapter. It was interesting to see Neijis reason.
*sniggers* And I can just see him dressed as Juliet too. With the 'We are not amused' look on his face. Hehehe
Anyways, that was a funny chapter more then anything and I have to thank you for the brilliant timing on updating combined with me getting the update email.
Just when I was thinking I was going to fall apart from the agony of a karate belt grading ITS HERE!

Look foreward to more.
person DeadUchiha
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"...and a part of him wondered if Sasuke didn’t relax because he knew just how...feminine he looked when he took the stick out." <---Funny! Mwahahahahhahahha! Also the TradeMark thing....*snicker*

Bla! Neji! Yack! I can't help it...i hate him! Even if i do love him...in this story...no matter what...i hate him...HATE! BILE! Oh sorry....lost control for a minute...

Yepers! It was cute how you made Neji have to be Juliette though...hahaha...(Sasuke should have been Juliette...grrr) I HATE NEJI!!! oh sorry...i'll just be going now...MWAHAHAHHAHHAHA! d(^-^)b
person DeadUchiha
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT IT CUT OFF MY REVIEW!!! WTF!?! GRRRRRR! Anyway that part was funny....i'm too pissed off now to retype everything...but i will say...I HATE NEJI! Oh but otherwise yeah...good job! And the trade Mark thing was funny too!
d(^-^)b
person -
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi -
Awesome AWESOME! Finallyyyyyyyyy, we get to hear some stuff about the mysterious pasts of the characters. Truthfully, it wasn't something I expected haha, but it was interesting enough :D I liked it. Cliched ;) but lovely!
When you said one more chapter to go, does that mean, to the end of the fic??? or whaaaaaaat? lol. Gyahhhh~ lol. I can't wait ^^
*needs to go* hopefully this review will make it in the system in it's entirety. I'm having bad reviewing luck lol.

person LtF
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO NARUTOOOOOOOOOO don't give up on Sasuke ;______________; He lurves you!!! Just get him drunk and then he'll confesssssssssssssssssss ;_________________;
person Hells-Infernal-Abyss
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha...wow...I'm am like...SO addicted to this fic. XD *sings* "You think I'm goooooooooooorgeous, you want to huuuuuuuuuuuuuug me, you want to kiiiiiiiiiiiiss me." I couldn't stop laughing at that part. Blazing Look Of Death was genius too. Keep up the awesome work. *waves a NaruSasu (I have a feeling that Naruto would totally dominate Sasuke in this fic. XD) flag around while screaming wildly*