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Heehee.
It's always fun when you've got two horny boys in bed together XD
And it was nice to learn how Neji first started liking Naruto :D Do we get to learn about Gaara next?

Awesome as always~ ^__^

Oh my gosh! The bed scene was fricking hilarious. I was gaping. O.O I mean, hello!~ They lost control. ^^ Teehees. Poor Neji, I feel that he's going to be heartbroken. x.x

Huzzah!!!! Cute Sasuke, flustered Sasuke, and SEDUCTIVE Sasuke all in ONE?!?! You’re obviously trying to kill me. I swear if I weren’t a stronger person I’d have died from blood loss ages ago. That’s a demeaning way to go: dying of a bloody nose and excessive blushing. ^_^ But there are definitely worse ways.

Man, I was laughing and holding my breath during that morning ‘wake up’ scene with Naruto and Sasuke. LoL. I absolutely LOVE the way you portray them. It’s definitely AU and you’ve made them YOUR characters but they’re still distinctly… them. I don’t know but this is one of my favorite Naruto fics of ALL time. Definitely in the top ten. And I’ve read TONS.

And the flashback with Neji was a really nice touch. It gave him some more depth and almost kinda made me want to root for him instead. ALMOST. Maybe Rock Lee can show up and they can get down and dirty? LoL. I’m only half serious. I just think NejiLee is one of the funniest odd couples ever created. Anyway, GREAT story! Can’t wait to read more… but I guess I’ll have to. Oh well. At least this story is definitely good enough that I won’t be in danger of forgetting about it… plus I can almost garuntee that I’ll read it like 8 times before you get back. Have fun and thanks for posting!

-Jiro ^_^

P.S. Thanks for putting me on the ML so I know about updates too!

I soooo love this story!!! Absolutely love it! And what a yummy and torturous way to wake up! Poor Sasuke, but he isn't getting any until he admits his feelings. Really don't blame Naruto about that. And I love the Negi as Juliet! The whole tootsie roll part had me laughing my ass off! I fell out of my chair! Really cant wait for the next update! I soo want to read more!

*glomps* You updated!!! Wheee!!! ^^ This chapter was reeeeeeally good -- not only did we get a bit of "action" (lol), but we also got a chance to understand the depth of Neji's feelings for Naruto. *sigh* As much as I want this to end with Sasuke and Naruto together (because Naru-kun really does love Sasuke, and vice-versa), I'm gonna' feel sorry for sweet little Neji-kun. *sniffs and cuddles a chibi-Neji* There, there; it'll be alright........ ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!! *wanders off while contemplating the "complications" of having a threesome......or foursome..........* ^^

OMG OMG OMG!!! cant waaaaiiitt for the last chapter *whine* hurry and post soon!!! ^^

Oh goodness. I've grown to love this. XD I remember seeing that Udder Butter stuff.. craziness! Anyhow, you say you like constructive criticism instead of one-liners or what not, but.. I don't really know what there is about this that bears criticizing. I really like what you've done with this! Although I'm not sure I can see Neji going all out on the flower thing.. he strikes me as a more subtle sort of guy. Is there going to be more of Gaara in this? I know this is a NaruSasu, but.. Gaara seems pretty one-dimensional as of now. ....and Naruto's obsession with cuddling people and using them as plushies reminds me vaguely of someone I know.. ::shoots a mild glare in Akai's direction::
Anyhow, could you also put me on your mailing list for when you update? I'm sure I'll talk to you before then, but have fun in Japan!
luv ya!

Nice, I like how you are going into the minds of the characters, I feel that I have a real understnading of the flow of the story. Great job.

Alright, I told you I would actually read this someday.. and I am! I'm on chapter 3 now, and I'm loving it! I outright snorted at the "It’s not every day you see someone caress a washing machine and chuckle evilly" bit.. and I really like how you're making Naruto exploit how everyone thinks he's oblivious. Great stuff! And the things you're doing to Sasuke.. I can't help it, I like abusing him, too. XD I'm positive I'll catch up within the next couple of days. I won't bother asking any questions because they might be answered in the chapters I haven't read yet. Anyhow, excellent job!

..... *cries of how good your story is* .... awesome... tremendous.... terrific... amazing.... *cries some more* ... I love your story, and I got to the end of Ch. 12 and now I am going to be coming here every day to see if you've updated :) I have been writing a SasuNaru fanfiction, but lately I've been caught up with other things and haven't been writing much... and now that I've read your story, I feel like I NEED to write more - with a lotta fluff.... I love you T_T