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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yayyyy i absolutly looooovveeeeeee your fanfic ^^ it's so cute and fluffyness powaa!!! hope they get soon together!
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waiting impatiently for the next chapter hihi XD
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waiting impatiently for the next chapter hihi XD
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 12)
About time we cut off the mystrey, and finally see what *Naruto* wants. And I just hope Sasuke realizes it soon, because as much as sexual tension is fun, you really can't - and shouldn't - fan it out for a zillion chapters.
Loved all of the Sasuke embarrsing; he really is so much fun to tease. ^_~
Awaiting the next two chapter,
Ja ne~
About time we cut off the mystrey, and finally see what *Naruto* wants. And I just hope Sasuke realizes it soon, because as much as sexual tension is fun, you really can't - and shouldn't - fan it out for a zillion chapters.
Loved all of the Sasuke embarrsing; he really is so much fun to tease. ^_~
Awaiting the next two chapter,
Ja ne~
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I may hate you... hmm, perhaps loathe is the proper word...the joy, the smut, the sasunaru goodness... all a dream sequence. That was cruel, and yet so well written that I can't bring myself to mind. Congrats on yet another amazing chapter.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have to say I wish I coul write chapters this long and make them this good. I actually wanted it to be longer... although it was a good place to leave off... Keep up the good work in any case, I can't wait to see Sasuke and Naruto finally get together. ^^
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ehehe! That little dream on Sasuke's part was EVIL of you! XD But it was a lurvely throw off, haha. The tension between them is driving me nuts, eek! I'm hoping Sasuke isn't going to mess up his chance with Naruto. ^^;
I also love the subtle stuff going on between them. I can't wait to get to know more about Naruto's POV, so awesome job as usual!
I also love the subtle stuff going on between them. I can't wait to get to know more about Naruto's POV, so awesome job as usual!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
am i the only one that was wanting to scream at sasuke while naruto and him were by the river? i mean, COME ON! just tell him that you like him! but as frustrating as that was, i loved this chapter. it had some of the best moments between those two. i actually thought that maybe, just maybe, something might really happen between them. oh, and you are so evil doing that bathtub scene. (giving everybody a taste of what's probably not gonna happn for a while.) now i'm wondering what naruto's planning for friday. (could it be a date?) ha! sasuke'd probably freak out if he thought that. but anyways...these latest chapters you've written i've enjoyed the best. i mean, i absolutely love this story, but the moments between naruto and sasuke have been great lately. i love when the focus is on their slightly-dysfunctional relationship. with naruto teasing, and sasuke just getting embarassed, everything's been great. and i'm so glad you're going to start doing more from naruto's pov. he is one huge mystery! but i liked how you switched to his perspective on the ride back. i was seriously thinking he was unaffected by sasuke. it's nice to see that sasuke affects naruto just as deeply as naruto affects the other. but how the hell can he keep cool with sasuke in his face? geez...you'd think he was never plagued with raging hormones (unlike dear sasuke). anyways...i'm rambling. i think i do that a lot. it's hard for me to get to the point. so...great chapter, looking forward to more, and i will seriously go into withdrawal when you leave! (but have a great time!) later!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Greaaaaaaaaaat Chap!! One thing though, NOT ENOUGH SIOUX!!!!!! lol but omgoddess! sooo much torture for the dark haired boy ^___^ ahh again w/ the sluggly buggly sasuke!!! soooo kawaii!!!!
poor neji, has no chance whatsoever! hehe and oooh mystery girl! lol you know my thoughts on that already ^__^ and gotta love kiba standin up to neji for naruto..such a good roomie!
awww naru really likes sask!!! hehe just is afraid that sask will toss him to the curb after he's "done" with him..*sigh* Sask better realize this soon or his ass is gonna get..well left cold ^___~
dood 2 more?? that's it?? T_T T_T nooo damn dood those two months better go by quick!!! we'll miss you!! i'll miss you!! you better have some serious chaps done when you get back ^__~ and lots of stories!!! matane!
poor neji, has no chance whatsoever! hehe and oooh mystery girl! lol you know my thoughts on that already ^__^ and gotta love kiba standin up to neji for naruto..such a good roomie!
awww naru really likes sask!!! hehe just is afraid that sask will toss him to the curb after he's "done" with him..*sigh* Sask better realize this soon or his ass is gonna get..well left cold ^___~
dood 2 more?? that's it?? T_T T_T nooo damn dood those two months better go by quick!!! we'll miss you!! i'll miss you!! you better have some serious chaps done when you get back ^__~ and lots of stories!!! matane!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(c12) AHHHHHHHhh omg, you really had me going in the bath tub there!! Any way i'm enjoying this story muchly, please continue soon ^__^
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what should be changed...its good to me. Going slowly, but having plot is good.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke was sssssssssssssoooooooooooo close to win. Seriously, you are keeping me hooked on the story. I wonder what will Gaara make for his move.