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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn. this was a good chapter. it was worth the wait :( I'm upset that the next chap will be the last one for a while :( but i'm sure it'll be a VERY BIG UPDATE when you're back *glares* lol ^^ i love the sappy scenes in the entire chapter! They're soooo in character with them! I'm sad though - I wish Sasuke had come out and said it and I wished Naruto had just understood; but it's okay, Naruto had his reasons! Hehe this is getting really really interesting, that's for sure. I'm reallyyyyyyy curious as to why Naruto-kun would want to be taking horticulture class, and what kind of show is it? Expect the unexpected from him, eh? For sure, for sure.
Can't wait :)
Can't wait :)
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear, you had WAY to much fun writing for Sioux in Chapter 11.*LOL*
Okay, anyway, I LOVE this fic! While Naruto's buffness startled me, I'm willing to forgive it for some great characterization and wonderful ups and downs. ^.^ I laugh, I swoon, I nearly cry, and I want to throw things at Neji and Gaara! Get away from Sasuke's Naruto! Or, wait.. maybe it's the other way around? Naruto definately is the one calling the shots here and none of the boys chasing him seem to realize it. Besides, Neji and Gaara are too wrapped up in "owning" him. Sure, Sasuke agreed, too, but he'd the only one who gets the fluffy moments. *L*
Can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for writing this! ^_^
Okay, anyway, I LOVE this fic! While Naruto's buffness startled me, I'm willing to forgive it for some great characterization and wonderful ups and downs. ^.^ I laugh, I swoon, I nearly cry, and I want to throw things at Neji and Gaara! Get away from Sasuke's Naruto! Or, wait.. maybe it's the other way around? Naruto definately is the one calling the shots here and none of the boys chasing him seem to realize it. Besides, Neji and Gaara are too wrapped up in "owning" him. Sure, Sasuke agreed, too, but he'd the only one who gets the fluffy moments. *L*
Can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for writing this! ^_^
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The constant teasing the innuendos, it is great. I love how you are developing Naruto's character. You really made the characters in this story your own. Keep up the good work.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Teehee, more of this interesting section of the fic. I do not blame Naruto for wanting to make sure Sasuke cares for him because obviously, Naruto cares for Sasuke. I actually like that a lot, the fact that Naruto knows what he wants but he doesn;t just want to give it all away, he also wants something in return.
Sasuke is so funny in his poor confused mind and boy, does he want Naruto. The last scene of him falling sleep and almost acknowledging his feelings was really nice. However, I am kinda worried about that bet. I think Naruto would be highly upset by it, he might actually think that Sasuke might have been false in his feelings and that would be like a betrayal. There are so many interesting things happening all the same time, you can't help but think.
I do hope Sasuke-kins tells Naruto that he likes him. Sometimes, honesty is a good thing.
Good going!
Sasuke is so funny in his poor confused mind and boy, does he want Naruto. The last scene of him falling sleep and almost acknowledging his feelings was really nice. However, I am kinda worried about that bet. I think Naruto would be highly upset by it, he might actually think that Sasuke might have been false in his feelings and that would be like a betrayal. There are so many interesting things happening all the same time, you can't help but think.
I do hope Sasuke-kins tells Naruto that he likes him. Sometimes, honesty is a good thing.
Good going!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
weeeee another chapter !!! Gaara is not really present in this fics so far ..... but anyway. I thought sooo dirty with the label, can't wait to see Naru-chan point of view lol.
Dammit, I,m tored between : Sasuke tell him you care !!! and Naruto kiss him !!!!!!!! can't wait to see Neji reaction soon, and what will do Gaara, after all Naruto is taken friday ;)
Dammit, I,m tored between : Sasuke tell him you care !!! and Naruto kiss him !!!!!!!! can't wait to see Neji reaction soon, and what will do Gaara, after all Naruto is taken friday ;)
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And some of us haven't reviewed...*blush* I added this to my favorites list without leaving a review...how shameful of me...
I suppose it goes almost without saying that I like this story... I like that your charcters (interpertation of them...whatever) is complex and dynamic....that there's a sense of realism...I like realism....ja ne
I suppose it goes almost without saying that I like this story... I like that your charcters (interpertation of them...whatever) is complex and dynamic....that there's a sense of realism...I like realism....ja ne
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter, had me dead confused during the part at the river for a moment, and then with Sasukes dream. I was like eh? Coolness, but...it doesnt fit with what Naruto said...Then it was a dream I nearly fell out of the chair. That was quite the teaser it was.
But I am glad it was just a dream because if it was not it would have totally messed up the wonderful job you're doing writing this fanfiction!
Good chappie, haha I love the way Naruto keeps tormenting Sasuke.
Definatly good stuff and I look foreward to the next chapter.
But I am glad it was just a dream because if it was not it would have totally messed up the wonderful job you're doing writing this fanfiction!
Good chappie, haha I love the way Naruto keeps tormenting Sasuke.
Definatly good stuff and I look foreward to the next chapter.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I SOOOOOO love this story! Need more SasuNaru from AkaiTsume. *zombie-walking*
You are officially my GOD! And if you do Sasuke even more cuddly, I'm gonna cry. It's just too cute!! ^o^
I liked the Naruto POV. Hope we get more of that.
Luv u *huuuuugs* <3
You are officially my GOD! And if you do Sasuke even more cuddly, I'm gonna cry. It's just too cute!! ^o^
I liked the Naruto POV. Hope we get more of that.
Luv u *huuuuugs* <3
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What do you know! You're such a tease really!!!!!And i'm sure you must laugh whenever someone tells you so!
Anyway....you're awsome!!! This fic is just...vraiment pas croyable!!!!!I really love it!
Sasuke is so slow...Is he ever gonna admit it to Naruto? And I sure hope Gaara and Neji won't get in their way!!!!!!!GGGRRR
Keep it going!!!!^^
See ya
Anyway....you're awsome!!! This fic is just...vraiment pas croyable!!!!!I really love it!
Sasuke is so slow...Is he ever gonna admit it to Naruto? And I sure hope Gaara and Neji won't get in their way!!!!!!!GGGRRR
Keep it going!!!!^^
See ya
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tricky tricky! XD *pouts* I thought that was really happening. Oh well, the chapter was still good :D Especially close to the ending. Can't wait for the next update!