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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person SasukeItachiSmex
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke...what? Sasuke WHAT!? -Pouts- How could you leave it off there!? Then again that was a lovely chapter as they all are. -Shifty glance- But I'm starting to squiiirm because you're making us waiiiit so long. ;.; It's so cruel of you yet I love the torture. -Grins- I love how you POV it from certain areas, and descrive everything....

AND...

A butt-squeeze?

I have never. EVER. Heard of a 'but squeeze'. I laughed so much while I read this. It sounds like me and my girlfriend. She absolutely ADORES horses and I'm scared shitless of them. >> She says she'll throw me over her shoulder and put me on one. -Huffs- ( I doubt that'll happen, but then again I always lose. )

Shantell: 13507146519476 Me: 0

And that's not the real estimate. xDD She has a loooot more.

Keep writing, it's so lovely. -Bounces- I can't wait for more!!!
person macy
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaa!! You're evil. I really thought Naruto and Sasuke finally got together! Waaa!!! You got me good, LOL. I'm still happy with their progress (outside the dream XD) since friends don't exactly cuddle like them right? Heehee.. Thanks for updating.
person NaruSasu FanBoi
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! Its really well written AND its hot! Why don't one of them admit they like eachother? *grumble*
Please update soon!
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stay tuned for the next chappie...you'll get a little insight into Neji. ^_^
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute. cuteeeee. :D. :D. :::DDD.
person chem chick
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH!!! I loved it! I can't wait for more! I really love Naruto's POV, that was nice to see what he's thinking, and the couch cuddles were the best! And the bathtub daydream! Yay!
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you added more of Naruto's P.O.V. this chapter! I love seeing into Naruto's mind! =D
There's a part of me that keeps wishing that Sasuke would just confess to Naruto...but then I suppose there wouldn't be much of a story huh? I have a feeling that the bet that Sasuke, Gaara, and Neji made might...cause problems later on as well! I love this story so much, it keeps getting better and better with each chapter, and I love the way small pieces of the puzzle is slowly falling into place...sort of! Also, the fact that you have such good spelling/grammar skills made this story all the more enjoyable! I'm so glad there's two more updates left before you leave...I just hope the second doesn't turn out to be a cliffhanger!
person kai
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, he feel asleep before he found out he loved him!!! nice update! i really enjoy the dialog that sasuke's horse has, very funny! so who called who about sasuke's whereabouts!! ino? sakura? another rabid fangirl? so naruto likes sauske and wants him to admit it? interesting, and damn why did you have us fooled about sasuke and naru in the tub? why?why? so close, damnit!! so close! XDD UPDATE SOON! i REALLY ENJOY YOUR FIC!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the---??? No!!! Bad author!!! Bad!!! You can't leave us with an ending like that!!! Evil, evil person!!! ...........although, it was really, reeeeally cute.......... ^___~ Thanks so much for the update -- I can't wait for the next two chapters!!! Oh, I hope that you give us someting "good" before you leave.......well, "good" as in more of what you've been writing, plus some. ^___^ Oh, and just to let you know, if you leave us with a cliffy, I'll personally form the lynch mob. And I can come up with some pretty terrible forms of torture, let me assure you. ^^ Keep up the good work......oh, and these are for you: *tosses you a bag of (insert the name of your "favoritest" favorite form of chocolate here)* ^___^ Ja ne!!!
person tenohikari
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Poor Sasuke and his daydreams. At least he didn't like almost drown in the tub and Naruto having to save and give him mouth to mouth... wait that wouldn't be that bad. Sasuke could at least claim to Neji and Gaara that Naruto kissed him first, heh.