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This story just keep getting better and better. I must admit, though, that I'm very impatient when it comes to this story. Even though I get email when an update comes out, I'm constantly checking this site to see if a new chapter is up. I very rarely do that with fictions. Keep up the good work!

ARGH!!! You are such a TEASE!!! OMG, I think I'm freaking out. Can they just KISS already, for REAL?!?! Dammit Sasuke, get it together and fess up! Wow, the whole part next to the river when Sasuke's being all seductive....that was just hot. I don't usually think of Sasuke as a sex god, but damn! And then the bathtub dream!!! Man oh man, you're killing us with the suspense. Hurry and update and get some loving in the next chapter!!

omg. you kick ass, plain and simple. some parts crack me up, others leave me wondering just what the heck happened. I'm glad there was more Naruto in this chapter and that the next will have more of him too, although I must admit that Sasuke is very amusing. I laugh at him. XD AND THE END OF THE CHAPTER! : )))))))) dude. :D

ahem.

the dream sequence was evil. I actually believed it, damnit. I was desperate enough to be fooled, lol

God i love your story. it makes me laugh so hard. Its coming along beautifully. Maybe as a treat, the week before you leave you should post 2 chapters. yay that sounds good. you know to tie us over until you come back to grace us with your o so wonderous self. Yes? Please? think 'bout it k?
Anyway....reviewers slacking off? heheh...thats funny.
Keep up the good work and update soon.
luv
Ravyn

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I must say.... although the characters are usually really occ... I enjoyed this chapter immensely

Oh, my snakes! This is an excellent story! I started reading not long after you posted Chapter 8, and I've been in love with it ever since, always waiting for another chapter to pop up. The storyline is superb. Your sense of humour and character personalities are perfect. And on an added note, I loved Sioux's captions. And Sasuke "firing ice daggers" from his eyes. Fire! BamBamBamBamBam! Amazing! Can't wait for more!!

I'd like to be added to the update list, if you don't mind. For extra measure, I'm also emailing you. You can add me under 'jokirkpatrick@gmail.com'. Thank you and keep up the great work!!

GREAT CHAPPIE!!! I laughed my butt off! gawddammit, that was great! I especially liked the horse's thoughts. XDXD *dies laughing*

I'd like warnings, please (I can't remember if I asked before), and the mail, as probably stated above, is puchuchan@gmail.com

please, keep up the good work, and I beg of you: continue soon!!! I LOVE THIS! *glomps fic*

:D :D :D :D :D I'll give this chapter the most smiley faces ever! heheheheheheheh.... im feeling high! wee~ sasuke finally expressed himself a teeny bit finally, doesn't he? forgotten his fear of riding and try to rush to naru's aid when he's falling. that is a very endearing part. Not to forget the lunch part, which is so very interesting.... oh man.... darn naruto's stomach for misbehaving...screw it grrr.... well... it won't be a good story without any unexpected stuff. this is one of the better chapter since there is so much fluff i am practically drowning in it.

It's nice to see the chapters updating quicly. ^^ Another interesting chapter. I'm really liking Sasuke in this story. And damn, that was close ~___^ good luck next time Sasu-chan,