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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just adding to your fabulous list of hundreds of reviews. I mentioned everthing I though of already.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dammit!!! curse naruto's stomach! argh!
(sigh) but that was one great chapter. i can't believe they FINALLY almost kissed. too bad, but that just makes the tension between those two even better. i seriously think that when those two finally decide to act on their feelings (and not just with their dick...AHEM...sasuke) it's going to be super hot. i mean, it's so obvious that sasuke has the hots for naruto, but now he's starting to really question how he feels for the blonde. (is there love in the air?) ahhhh...how cute. when sasuke was so worried about naruto when his horse got panicked, that was so endearing, if a bit odd. it was sasuke acting concerned afterall-because no matter how much he cares he's still a prick.
but back to why this chapter was great: two words. "z" snap. 'nuff said. that had to be one of the funniest parts of this story you've written. and the "i'll bitch slap your sorry ass" and "mm-hmm, yes ah will". i was cracking up so bad!!! i love the humor you have going on. (and speaking of the "z" snap, did you ever watch "in living color"? that reminds me of a sketch they used to do. it always cracked me up!) but anyways...the best part of this chapter was the almost-kiss. i just hope sasuke doesn't continue to act like a dick because it didn't happen. i'd hate to have him ruin something before it even happens. and that just reminds me of the deal between sasuke, neji, and gaara. man, it's gonna suck when naruto finds out. drama, drama, drama. but i'm rambling. anyway...before i go, could you add me to your list of people to email when you update? i'd really appreciate it!
oh, this was another great one: "sasuke put a new clip of ice daggers into his eyes and took aim at naruto’s mildly concerned face". ha!
(sigh) but that was one great chapter. i can't believe they FINALLY almost kissed. too bad, but that just makes the tension between those two even better. i seriously think that when those two finally decide to act on their feelings (and not just with their dick...AHEM...sasuke) it's going to be super hot. i mean, it's so obvious that sasuke has the hots for naruto, but now he's starting to really question how he feels for the blonde. (is there love in the air?) ahhhh...how cute. when sasuke was so worried about naruto when his horse got panicked, that was so endearing, if a bit odd. it was sasuke acting concerned afterall-because no matter how much he cares he's still a prick.
but back to why this chapter was great: two words. "z" snap. 'nuff said. that had to be one of the funniest parts of this story you've written. and the "i'll bitch slap your sorry ass" and "mm-hmm, yes ah will". i was cracking up so bad!!! i love the humor you have going on. (and speaking of the "z" snap, did you ever watch "in living color"? that reminds me of a sketch they used to do. it always cracked me up!) but anyways...the best part of this chapter was the almost-kiss. i just hope sasuke doesn't continue to act like a dick because it didn't happen. i'd hate to have him ruin something before it even happens. and that just reminds me of the deal between sasuke, neji, and gaara. man, it's gonna suck when naruto finds out. drama, drama, drama. but i'm rambling. anyway...before i go, could you add me to your list of people to email when you update? i'd really appreciate it!
oh, this was another great one: "sasuke put a new clip of ice daggers into his eyes and took aim at naruto’s mildly concerned face". ha!
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! that was hilarious! Please please please please pleasep please please please please plese please update! this is such a great story! OMFG! It's sooooooooooo hilarious!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo! I'd definitely love an email.
I'm dying for these two to get together.
Great job--Keep updating, and let me know when you do.
I'm dying for these two to get together.
Great job--Keep updating, and let me know when you do.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read the last two chapters yet because I wasn't able to get to a comp for a while. But I'm back.^^ I hope I read something nice and juicy!! I would like you to e-mail and holla at cha number one fan(i.e. me!) sometime. I'm also got some naruto fanfics coming up that i'm going to post real soon. Keep a look out for them under the sn MistressCoCoLoVeR. I'll holla at cha later. bye. ^^
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A GREAT chapter, i was laughing the whole time, fantastic work, poor sasuke, hope he survives! I take it you've ridden your share of horses before or else you wouldn't have been that discriptive with the saddling of the horses. I've ridden a few, a nice horse by the name of Uno, it's almost deformed looking, the horse is...well..to put it in one word: Retard. Anywaysm please update soon, and i'll takw your advice, please e-mail me when the next chapter is up! Ja Matta until the next update!
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.
My.
Fucking.
God.
I have fallen in love with this fic now. Seriously. I've always wondered what would happen if Sasuke got on a horse... *is a fucking horse nut* XD Let this be yet another worshipful review to this fic. *bowbow*
My.
Fucking.
God.
I have fallen in love with this fic now. Seriously. I've always wondered what would happen if Sasuke got on a horse... *is a fucking horse nut* XD Let this be yet another worshipful review to this fic. *bowbow*
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic, thank you for posting it to share with people like me!
i like your style of writing as well as your plotline.
-rc
i like your style of writing as well as your plotline.
-rc
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh... Sasuke phobia about horses? well... he's gonna engage in some horse play with his loverboy soon so might as well get use to it :D I like the beginning part where Sasuke found himself tangled up with Naruto. As well as in the bathroom where they were both so close to each other! Hmmm... only problem is that since sasuke wanted to get naru to kiss him, why being cold? he should be going along with naruto's flirts instead of evading. and naru is so damn adorable during the scene in the bathroom... lolz.... tucking his head securely onto sasu's shoulders... and there is a mirror in front of them moreover. sasuke should be melting at that moment, seeing the reflection of the couple of them cuddling.
The horse part is quite ordinary but i supposed it is a plot builder? go riding together. think of the possibilities :D ok update soon! (as usual)
The horse part is quite ordinary but i supposed it is a plot builder? go riding together. think of the possibilities :D ok update soon! (as usual)
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, really love your story... I've read it twice, this is my third time! hahahaha
Btw, you mention that you would email to those who'd ask for updates... Would you email me when you got update too?
Thx so much!! Btw... when would that very moment happen?
Btw, you mention that you would email to those who'd ask for updates... Would you email me when you got update too?
Thx so much!! Btw... when would that very moment happen?