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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Elric Maxwell
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic was SO GOOD! I had every intention of studying, but I had to finish the whole thing before I reviewed! I hope you update with the finish soon. I have never read a fic that had me at the edge of my seat due to the sexual tension, and keep me laughing at the same time! *kneeling many times on floor* You are an awesome writer! ^_^ EM
person Keishiki-Dono
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! OwO<3 Finally an update!!!! I luv the newest chapter and I can't wait for the follow-up. Hope you update again soon. Luffs.
person Keishiki-Dono
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally! An update!!!! I loved your newest chapter and can't wait for the follow-up. Hope you update again soon.

Much luffs.
person The Empress
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up in joy* Yes! Finally! Fi--nal-ly! They finally admit they love each other and the other to are out of the frickin' picture. Geez. Although I did think Naruto was gonna seriously open up a can of 120% whoopass on those three. =/ I was kinda scared. It was as if I was there having Naruto stare at me like that....scary. At least it didn't hurt them. As for the part with Naruto dancing in his spongebob boxers with eraser hair holding a broom while wearing glasses and Sasuke walking in on him.....roflmao. That was hilarious. lol ^_^ I especially like the part with them making out and Kiba walking in on them...*giggles* I can't wait to read the next chapter. =) *is breathing easy now* I am so relieved. This story has been messing with my head and I loved every freakin minute of it. No story has ever done that.....no story has EVER done that to me. Until now. You are so cool. Someone should make a doujinshi of this or anime or something because this story kicks ass. ^_~
person Manda-Kun
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! That was priceless! Gods, ya had me laughing when Sasuke was like, :I'm going to die, oh god." And that kiss was HOT. I'm SO happy that they loooove each other. xD It was starting to get annoying. I'm getting mixed feeling bout the end of this. Happy it's gonna be over, so I don't have to review for every new chapter xD but sa cause I'm gonna miss it. Oh the horror. <3
person Manda-Kun
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! That was priceless! Gods, ya had me laughing when Sasuke was like, :I'm going to die, oh god." And that kiss was HOT. I'm SO happy that they loooove each other. xD It was starting to get annoying. I'm getting mixed feeling bout the end of this. Happy it's gonna be over, so I don't have to review for every new chapter xD but sa cause I'm gonna miss it. Oh the horror. <3
person Paradox Ink
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so great! I'd totatlly lost hope that this story would be finished, but then I was bored one weekend, and check up on it and THERE IT WAS! Almost DONE! This chapter was really great, though I'm mad at being deprive of a well deserved lemon-scene. I'm glad they've finally stopped playing tag with Naruto. Although, he was a bit meant to Gaara and Neji, don't you think? Gaara I can understand. He was acting really evil and psychopathic, but Neji? He was nice! He backed off! Well, I assume he'll make up with them later. I mean, Naruto is just too nice not to. Poor Sasuke, though. He's always so confused by Naruto.
I can't wait until the big birthday chapter! Update soon!
person dAni3Lr
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! hell, i LOVE EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER FOR THIS FIC! 8D 8D 8D

To Naruto: That's how you do it man! Way to go!! I'm so damn proud of you!! XD

To Sasuke: Just wait for your Prince Charming to "sweep you off your feet!"

I really love some of the lines used here, like "Sunshine of the planet" and "Could you be angsty over your ass?". That was hilarious! XD

One more chapter to go and I'll RE-READ this whole fiction again! Yay!!! XDDD
person KuroiItami
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*applauses* You should be proud of yourself. As in, EXTREMELY proud of yourself, since you got a quiet reader like me to actually review your breath taking fanfic. It's been YEARS since I last reviewed a fanfic, so I admit, I'm beyond rusty in writing reviews. *bows* Forgive my awkwardness ^^;;; Anyway, enough of my crap and let's get onto the praise!

Well, first things first...*glomps* I LOVE this fanfic to bits!! From the witty comic reliefs to the heart throbbing angst, I was seriously on the edge of my seat throughout the whole story, ESPECIALLY this chapter (oh gods...Ghostbusters....THAT brought back good memories ^___^) Thank you SO much for reminding me that there ARE good fanfics out there, and that it's sometimes worth the time to surf through a horde of SasuNaru fanfics. My day was seriously brightened up because of this update; you have no clue how much I needed this diversion, so *deathglomps* keep up the good work and keep writing! I'll always be supporting you and your stories, even if I don't review! (and I apologize for not reviewing more often ^__^;;; ) Seriously wish I can write a more critical and longer review, but I really need to study more for my upcoming midterm...>.< I hope this is satisfactory enough ^^;;;

- KuroiItami
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww! Darling, that's sweet! I'm gald you finally updated.. been waiting loooooooooong! ^^ It's always a pleasure reading this- and i await the epilogue with glorious anticipation. Goodluck! ^^