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No fair, no fair! No smutt!!! *whines pathetically* Oh well, i'll live. Anyways, keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter!

another great chapter, yay! God do i love this story, i was laughing my ass off when naruto told sasuke that he was gona 'ride him all day', that was the best! i really really hope that naruto is testing how strong sasuke's feelings are for him because he actually likes sasuke back, but is afraid to get to close and being hurt. i'd kill for some narusasu action but since that "kissing" bet was made i have a feeling that it may be awhile before we get any steamy scenes. Maybe you could have naruto and sasuke 'Accidentally' kiss so technically there's no rule breaking or accidentally fall onto each other in a naughty position *wink wink*. at least give us something to curb our yaoi blood lust. i love the sexual innuendos naruto's always hinting to sasuke, it's freakin HOT!
please update soon and give us another chapter, i really can't wait to see what happens now that naruto and sasuke are alone together, and i'm curious as to who naruto's friends are. i hope haku is one of them, i love him, he was one of my fav characters and i'm so mad he was killed off so early in the series. i'd be pretty cool if you had him in your story.
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good chapter. Naruto is turning out to be a terrible evil tease, it's great. I really enjoy the interaction between the characters. I actually laughed out loud with the flower bit, and that scene in the car with that cat song. Good job. Not many people can be funny, you pull it off beautifully.

...Well, now that I'm well and officially hooked... you better write more soon... I know it's hard to pump out chapters but you're really good at it. ;_; This is awesome. Keep up the good work.

~Hawkmun

i can't remember if i ever reviewed this or not, and i'm certainly not reading through your whole fucking mountain of reviews for my name, so i'll just pretend like i never did....

Anyway, i just have to say that this is one of my favorite fics right now! I just love it! I must admit, that the lack of Sasu/Naru*ahem* NARU /SASU-ness is frustrating, but i totally understand why it is absent thus far...DAMN THE FRUSTRATION! Ah, well, if you just made the boys hop on each other and start humping, the story would lose all of its respect and turn into a big easy whore... keep it going just like you are!

though, it is a sensational occurance that in this AU the 4 hottest friggin boys in the Naruto universe all happen to LIKE BOYS...well NARUTO anyway, but it makes for a fun time reading!!! LOL... Naruto Chan is sooo lucky!!! why can't those sexy boys chase ME like that!!!??? hahahaha! I'm okay really...

OMG! is Neji ever ANNOYING!!!!! GEEZ!!! I HATE HIM!!! and that says a lot coming from me! He makes me want to fucking slap him for being a goon! He's borderline CREEPY! Good work in using him to create tension! He makes my eye twitch! And i'm like "GRRRRR!!!!"

Gaara kind of freaks me out too, cuz i expect to see him all dark and spooky, but he's just kind of quiet and shy...which i guess IS spooky...um...yeah...hahahaha! *wants him to rub HER temples!*

Sasuke is the best! I just love him. he's all high strung and jealous, just like that bastard should be! Damn him for being stupid and not banging the shit out Naruto after that rub down!! well, i guess that wouldn't have worked storywise..hee hee GO SASUKE CHAN! MAKE NARUTO LOVE YOU!

Finally...your Naruto...OMG...So funny! He's like...this DORK...who in every other reality, should be picked on for being a big dork, but really happens to be the LUCKEST FRIGGIN GUY ON THE PLANET!!!! and he's so sweet! and cute! and lovable! And there is some mystery there too! What's going on with that??? AHHHH! You really bring out the qualities that shine in the current canon, like being naieve, but not stupid...and crafty! Such a plotting little tease! o.O

Kiba's character is also good. I like the defencivness he has over his roommate/best friend...and the fact that he isn't gay...that was needed badly! HAhaha! It's nice that he is so ambivalent to Naruto's awkward situation, like, he just wants what's best for him...(Which BTW happens to be SASUKE!!!! AAAAHHHH!!!!)


Sigh...that turned out longer than expected! well, i guess it was long over due though...since i've just been drooling over your chapters and not having the decency to let you know about it! *Glomp* Really, keep up the good work! I hope this story doesn't end up on the back burner because i would be really sad! I need so see them get together!! Damn it! COME ON!!!!! hahaha! Alright, i'm done now...Laters! d(^-^)b

Naruto's truck is well earn through hard work and it sure does suit him. And I'm glad Sasuke conrtoled himself lol. Oh I bet i know who those kids that naruto has been talking about. And will we finally see Tsunade?

This is really good. I like your writing skill alot. Keep up the good work and don't forget to update. I would give you my email but someone i know might be on this website trying to hunt me down i swear *-_- but you most likey didn't want it anyway. Anyway good luck again.

Yay!!! You updated again!!! *gives you the usual chocolates* ^^ I absolutely loved this chapter -- the way Neji was straight-forward and frank with Naruto was a nice "change", if it can be called that, and I loved the ending so, so, soooo much!!! Having Sasuke be "sentimental" is a great idea -- and you kept him in character at the same time, so congrats!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!

I was extremely amused by the usage of the song. Naruto seems to milk the innuendos for all it is worth. Good choice, it made for good reading. Some character development for Kiba was nice, it is good to know that he isn't just a roommate but that he has been friends with Naruto for a long time. I really would like to see that little more.

Sasuke amuses me although sometimes I feel his inner Sasuke comes out more often into the open (that is why it is so teasable). I don't like Neji in this chapter..I can't tell why but it was funny the way he handled the whole situation. Don't mind me.

The last line of the fic was interesting, it is a good development, and I am curious as how it will flow from here.

I love the mushy sasuke/naruto goodness in this chapter!! even though you still have the rivalry thing in there at the beginning, the rest of it was very nice!!

And since it was so nice and fluffy at the end, i could stand that untill you get onto the smut. *cackles madly*