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Glad to hear it'll be Sasu/Naru... I was worried for a while there, lol. I really like how Sasuke is warming up to Naruto and not just jumping him, like most people make them do. Also I like how Naruto is singling Sasuke out. It's descreet... yet at the same time all the more provocative mwahaha. I would also like to praise you on your grammar and effort to make this an exceptionally enjoyable story. Ja ne!

Great job so far. I highly enjoy your writing style, it's fun and humourous while being well written at the same time. The love triangle or should I say square, between the boys cracks me up. I love the rivalry between the boys and their lusting for Naruto. Another thing I want to mention is the way you described Naruto, it's so hard to find a good fic with a seme Naruto. I honestly picture him the same way, tall and big, not the sissy short Naruto I'm always reading about.
I'm trying to write something constructive but nothing major comes to mind! >___<" Just write at your own pace and have a good beta, that's all I can advise! :) Good luck with the next chapter!

wow! this was your best chapter yet! great job! please update fast!

Really great! I am so enjoying this story! It is killing me! I want to know what Naruto is thinking!!! Please update soon!

Been sick and I finally got to read chapter 8. Personally I didn't really like the dream sequence because to me it sounds like he's going to loose it and hurt all of them and push them all away one way or another. It also seems that Sasuke's having more and more trouble keeping himself under-tabs. Maybe he should realize how freaking weird he's been acting and try to cool it down (if he can't then he could get angry at himself and that'd make for some interesting reading).

What I did like was how calm Gaara has been, he seems to be the only non-spaz. XD And I just love it when you bring in Kiba. I love that little dude even if someone stuck him in a leather outfit with a puffy collar.... actually that sounds kind of yummy. Er, well, my point is; you write Kiba and Hinata very well I can't critisize. lol good work

Ah-HAH!!! You did update today.

I already mentioned all of the points I could think of to you ealier, so I won't repeat them here.

OK. I'll ttyl. Update as soon as you can!

You made my day! Yay, another chapter... I love them.
I love how you've always got me guessing at the end of a chapyter, but without an actual cliffhanger.

Oh god, Naruto really cracked me up in the beginning of the chapter. He is so devious! Sasuke is so predictable it's endearing.

And Neji: you eeediot. I personally agreed with Naruto and his reaction. “I couldn’t help myself. You remind me of a flower.” Woah, Neji! WTF? “Are you deliberately trying to slaughter my sense of male pride here??” Go Naruto, go Naruto go. *chants*

It's about time Sasuke figured it out! Yay Kiba.

Omg. The cat song. I'm dying here. *weeze*

I really like the doodle of the orange spiral and that it was done in crayon. Hehe, "I’m going to milk the experience for all it’s worth.” Freud would be so proud. >_< I don't even think Naruto meant it that way.

Ooo. Sharing a bed. Iiiinteresting. (Heh, I guess I'm a hornball too, Sasuke, lol.) I love Naruto's pillows!

nice trunk!! Anyways, I really loved the song, had my laughing for ages!! Your writing is awesome, i love it!! As for the whole flower scene from Neji, that was funny, very poteic guy, seems ooc and not so ooc at the same time. I don't know how that works but it does. XD You kept that Naruto lives alone, like the manga, in an apartment and all, great job!! I thought you put him in a house or something, since you did say kids but you didn't. Hehehe, Sasuke and Naruto in the same bed, jump him Sasuke, you know you want to!! Anyways, kids? whose kids? who haven't you mentioned in this fic, shikamaru, chouji, shino? Any of them or some other people? hmmm...update soon!!

ooouh, the song looks good, and thanks a lot for Kiba, or else sasuke would have beena a real ass.

and damn Neiji, can't say if he's dumb or a genius yet ...