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This story is great. I have no idea how old it is since I found it via that search function, but it really is fantastic. I hope you keep updating it. I'd love to see how it develops.

O.O Excellent! eee! Oh do continue it! I loved Kan-chan pissing off the politicians and Temari calling Gaara Cute *squee!*

Hi. I just came across your story, and the first chapter sucked me in. I really like your writing "voice." I, too, am plagued by extreme laziness and easily distracted-ness. Favorite part is when Temari is about to pass out and Gaara says, "Shit" and then she comments on how someone taught her baby brother to curse and how cute it was. I had to stop and giggle for a few moments. Oh, and the bit with Sasuke and the rope. "I know a few." Love that. XD I read authors comments! ...And I'm sorry that this is really quite... no correlation in the thought process. I opened it at the end of the first chapter, and added some at the end of each chapter. Oh, and I must say that I adore the conversations between Naruto and Kyuubi.

I really love where this story is going - as in the Sasuke/Naruto/Gaara, but also as in the great plot that you are creating. I love the dialog in this fic - the pacing seems realistic and comfortable. In fact, part of the reason that this fic is so attractive to me is because it feels so realistic, well, for a shinobi village world anyways :). The descriptions also help to make this story a joy to read. You do not go overboard, but you have just enough detail to capture each scene beautifully. I really can't wait to see what happens next - I always find myself surprised as the plot changes and twists.

Thank you for writing and for sharing!

The story is absolutely wonderful so far. Chapter four came out fine. I like the liberties you took with the Kyuubi seal. I've always found it more interesting when an authors takes a canon concept and twists it around a bit to give it an interesting quality. And Sand's political thing? Good idea also. I'm complete shit when it comes to most political things, so I probably dont even understand it that well, but the general idea is interesting. Waiting for an update to this fantastic story.

I think this story's great. I'm really looking forward to seeing what's going to happen next.

Hey, hey now. You didn't butcher Sasuke, and you're writing is definately some of the best I've seen here. I laughed quite a lot.... and I'm sounding like a pretentious ass. Right. Okay then, they only wtf? moment I had is with the political system, since, by the first Sasuke Retrieval Arc (which was two years ago according to your chronology..I think), Gaara was already Kazekage.

Other than that, great work and write more soon!

awesome story please update soon I really want to see what happens next.

I love you. So much.

Seriously, your fic is just....all the...and the! It should have it's own ~religion~, you know? All the pretty pretty interaction between everyone, be it sibling, teacher or old friends. You seem to have a wonderful way of capturing the words and laying them straight out onto the page, 'cause they all seem to flow so ~naturally~. Unlike me, who has to capture words in bottles and use tweezers to keep them in place.You've never even come near the dreaded realms of god-moding, Mary Sues/Gary Stus, out-of-character-esque parts or even bad spelling! I had next to none, maybe even no nitpicks for any of your chapters, an amazing feat. Everything you've writeen so far has painted me seven lucky flavours of happy and also causing me to lose my coherency.

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~Zizzo

Hay UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like this story and I would like to see an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster