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Woot! Someone else who is going to Otakon! Maybe i'll see you there!
I love your story by the way! I like the way you are playing everyone. And I think the Sasuke going on the ship should be very intersting to see where that goes. I can't wait to see how Naruto, Gaara, and Sasuke are going to get together, will how the stories going now i'm not really sure how there are going to get together which is really cool because most of the time I can tell almost from the start how the story is going to work out, but with this one i can't really tell. Ooh and why no Kakashi and Iruka I think they are one of the best pairs in Naruto. Of couse Naruto, Gaara, and Sasuke have to be number one! But I love your story and hope that it will conitine to be as great as it is now!

Until Next Time

~Gara of the Black Sand

OMG, this fic is AMAZING!!! *glomps* ^^ I absolutely love it -- your characterizations and descriptions are both wonderful and refreshing, and I simply adore your writing style!!! *gives you chocolates* A very neat idea -- I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!

This is VERY original.It visualises amazingly well,its exciting,multitasking with the layers of plot.Just really solid work by an obviously serious(?) fan.Just some boom shit.The characacters are IC and the pace for the first Two chapters would make a rippingly good opening to a movie.

Yes,Kakashi is treated as less than onnipitant,I loved the touch Tsunade puts on him then throws him,then its "go fetch".Iruka:" he had a con mans smile",absolutely,I am speackless,never thought of it that way before but of course, how else could he be good at everything and trusted enough to raise the children to chunin and come across as bland and unnoticable.That really rocks. Tsu and Jir interchange,Why should I stop now,refering to blamming Jir against the wall for "trying".Even Sasukes' snake had a solid character sketched in,It felt responsible for him,god,thats so cute {I have a pet snake 'Kaa") so I am open to snakey ways. Yup,I am just thrilled to death with this work".Superior workmanship,best quality"(line from Bladerunner") Ignore bad spelling,up for 40 plus,wonkiness making me sloppy.

Wow!

So does Naruto find him?

Or does Sasuke track him down?

Or does the Konoha Anbu find him?


Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.

Very interesting developments. The fight was yummy, and I enjoyed your interpretation of iruka as well. There is a special place in my heart for "Iruka is stronger that he looks" characterizations.

The encounter with Kabuto was interesting, and I'm not too certain why the traitor would be so eager to fight Naruto. He must no that at this point he's horribly outmatched.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm not even in the Naruto fandom per se, but this fic was wonderful. *applauds* Hope you update it soon!

oooh! goodyness!!! I LOVE GAANARU!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!! COOKIES AND HUGGLES!!!!!

this was a really good chapter. Good story in general I should say actually. The only thing that could have improve the end of the chapter would be more of an argument about looking for Sasuke and leaving kohona from Naruto.

if you need a review to update then Ill gladly give you one coz this story is worth of it!!!!!!!!XDD gosh its so cool and I love the pairing you put anD OMG OMG OMG OMG UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! XDDD