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Wow, this is very good. You're an excellent writer and your characterization is wonderful, especially Naruto, who is absolutely spot-on. I'm amazed that you've managed to juggle great plot, writing, and characterization - awesome job. I can't wait to see more of this.

This is very interesting. I really like where you are going with this fic.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Your characterizations are right on, which I so seldom see ^_^ Great job!

hey. I'm not an author, so I don't have a good idea of how hard it is to write, but this compared to any of the other pieces I've read today is sort of like trying to stand up piles of plastic next to the Hope Diamond. I really enjoyed the way you handled bringing the first chapter in, exercising a balance between the two situations of Konoha and Suna. I also enjoyed Tenmari's personality; though I've only seen 1 episode, I've read all the manga + raws, and I find myself laughing when she's talking to her brother. -- 'Don't make me regret not killing you.' -- That aside, I'm looking forwards to your promised pairings. I'm a huge fan of GaaNaru, and a growing GaaSasuNaru fan. I look forwards to any updates.
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good fic. i hope that you continue it. there were a few minor typos, but otherwise, pretty well written and very original.

ohhh. very good. With these pairings, I was expecting a quick, borderline OOC lemony fic, but you surprised me by having actual plot and bothering with solid set-up and characterization. This means I can hope for a *gasp* believable get-together, in the middle of a real story that's not just about romance and sex! And EEE GAAARAA. *loves on you* he's so cute, in a sorta freaky way, and i love the interaction with his siblings. I also really like the bit with Tsunade and Sakura -- especially the realization that OMG she got a lucky hand. *shock!! horror!!*
I shall be waiting for more. ^___^

I was just browsing through the pages of Naruto fics and I stumbled upon your fic. You haven't updated in a while and I really think you should! This story so far is awesome. It seems to have a real plot, and I love your portrayal of Gaara. Mmmm, and I'm especially looking forward to NaruGaara. I love how you made the Sand nins more of a family, which is very touching. I find Gaara very sexy, so PLEASE UPDATE!!!

i want more, gimme mooooorrrreeee!!! Please...? Anyhoo, loved it, cant wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. TaTa

Awww... I know!! Gaara was SOOOO cute when he was little!! He was smaller than all the other kids, and he did have a cute little teddy bear that he always carried around.. *Sniffles* Oh the memories... I can just about remember the time when he killed Yashamaru!! *Sob sob* That's when I started being real proud of him!! Ehh... Make more!! Make more chapters, ya!? 'Tis good, 'tis good!! Continue!! ^^

^^ I wish my expirements came out that well.