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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice, really nice^^ actually...GODDAMN COOL SO UPDATE OR DIE!!*insane look*^^
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lookin' good so far.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit confused with the pairing..Since this eventually becomes GaaNaru then to NaruSasuGaa? / ^-^U \ umm...yeah I love Sasu-chan! :randomly: Nice chapter! I can't wait for next.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finaly somthing new. Keep writeing and I'll keep reading. ^_^
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the stand on pluralizations! I so want to bite things when I see kunais, etc...just *argh*, so wrong.
And this is a very intriguing story, I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with it--already your Gaara has caught my attention. Very nice characterization. I'm very curious how the character interactions will play out between Sasuke, Naruto, and Gaara, as the idea of them all together makes me strangely sparkly *heh*
And this is a very intriguing story, I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with it--already your Gaara has caught my attention. Very nice characterization. I'm very curious how the character interactions will play out between Sasuke, Naruto, and Gaara, as the idea of them all together makes me strangely sparkly *heh*
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, you have my full attention. *glomps you* Actually, I found your mixture of languages well done, compaired to others (like instead of randomly sticking in japanese words, yours had an inpact). You describe things very well, and I'll be watching out for your next chapter! Don't leave us hanging!!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!More Gaara/Naruto fiction! I haven't seen any yet..(though its only the first chapter^^) and I love the focus on it. Not many stories now about the relationship between the three sand nins. And they're my favorite characters along with Kiba and Lee.
Pleasepleasepleaaaseeeeeeee let the rest of the story contain some semblance of a continued story of the relationship with the siblings;-;
It would be so cool if you made Gaarakun run away after killing some child or something because Shakaku took control..and he sneaks to Konoha or something and Temari and Kankuro go looking for him.
Mwah, I know you probably won't continue the story like that, after all your story already rocks so dont pay any attention to me!!^^;
Anyways, I hope you write more soon, I'll be looking every five minutes for updates:XDD
Pleasepleasepleaaaseeeeeeee let the rest of the story contain some semblance of a continued story of the relationship with the siblings;-;
It would be so cool if you made Gaarakun run away after killing some child or something because Shakaku took control..and he sneaks to Konoha or something and Temari and Kankuro go looking for him.
Mwah, I know you probably won't continue the story like that, after all your story already rocks so dont pay any attention to me!!^^;
Anyways, I hope you write more soon, I'll be looking every five minutes for updates:XDD
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy, that was a great start. I'm biased towards anything Gaara, and I wanted to snuggle him. Your writing is really good. Where have you been all this time? :*