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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent yuri fic.
I love the pairing.
I love the pairing.
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Errr, the constant paragraph breaks was rather distracting. All the cursing was too. Other than that, you did fair. Grammarical errors here and there, "cryed" and the wrong form of 'there' are a couple of examples. But there wasn't anything major that left me totally lost. As I said, fair, it would have been much better if it wern't for all those breaks.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good fic! I liked it! you should write an OroKabu yaoi fic!! I`d really like to read it! *drool
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kool
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd love it if you wrote more.
Nice choice of pairing here at first. ^^ Tsunade/Shizune.. :: love ::
Nice choice of pairing here at first. ^^ Tsunade/Shizune.. :: love ::
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't normally read Yuri but I figured I'd give it a chance. Not bad, you have potential as far as I can tell. Though I got confused at times as to who you were talking about doing what actions. You kept saying her and it seemed you were switching between them. Maybe be a little more clear about which character is doing what.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe I loved it! Make more!
lol i could just say this on msn but oh well.
lol i could just say this on msn but oh well.