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for Abandoning Hope

by Mieren

person kirikiri_mai
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I must say, I really like this fic. I read all six chapters in one go. I actually purposefully missed school because I wanted to read it all, I just couldn't stop.
The technique is also very good. I have grown up with an author-mum, and when I showed her this fic ( I have never told her I read stuff like this before, but I just couldn't help it) she initially freaked and said she couldn't understand how I could read stuff like that, but when she got over the shock she said that despite the cruelty, it was very well written. And I really hope you'll update soon!
I'm not sure if even Kyuubi could generate new arms and fingers and stuff, but maybe he could get some cool metal prosthetics so he's kinda like terminator!!!! Yeah!!! well... maybe not... But I do hope Kakashi and Jiraiya are going to kick Orochimarus scaly ass!!!

and I give you a whole bag of insentive as well! hope it helps!
person Anon
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As sad as this story is, it's still interesting. Please continue. ^^
person hogo-chan
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute chapter! please update soon!
person akuma_river
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. So let me guess Naruto never gave them the Kyuubi? So when are they going to come back?

With the Kyuubi he was previously able to heal holes in his flesh, could he possibly do that for missing limbs?

Keep up the awesome work. I am still holding out for good news. Coolsa.
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I have this story saved to my favorites. I hope you update soon. Please! :D
person silverfox
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter and a very very good *omfg* GREAT fic now update dammit
person Shedding Ink
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh.. Now I see why you have stopped posting regularly. I must admit I was getting pretty pissed at you.

I like this story.. alot. Hopefully you'll be able to recreate the lost pages well enough.
person Ru-Shin
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! YOU UPDATED!!!! *dances* Heeheehee...I have the image of Naruto doing all that in my head. XD
Ooooo....That sucks. O_O I lost my notebook too...>_< But I also forgot the point of my story so I haven't rewritten it yet. ^^;;

You need some incentive? *digs around in her bag and pulls out a huge armload of it* There ya go. ^^
person Yami-Hikari
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I like it better when it's happier.
How can I give you incentive? I guess I'll just tell you that I love this fic, and I check every single day for a new chapter, if only becasue I can't bear the thought of Naruto in such a bad condition. I keep hoping that Kyuubi will somehow help regrow some of the missing bits.
person VS
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it was short, but I'm just glad it was there. ^_^ I lurv this fic.