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for Abandoning Hope

by Mieren

person Anon
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! I thought you had finally updated and really you must have edited the chapter or something! Please bring a part 6 soon. I've been waiting for weeks.
person The Empress
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto. =( Good thing Sakura found him or he would have been a goner. Damn Orochimaru, Itachi, and Kabuto! May they rot it the deepest, darkest pits of hell for all eternity!

Anyways, Nice fic. I can't wait to read more. =) Even though I almost cried.....almost. *tears falling down face* Ok. I cried....*sighs* That was sad. I gotta go before I start crying again.
person Shedding Ink
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.. which is why I'm getting upset that you haven't updated. I expected a new chapter this past weekend. Hopefully you'll update soon.
person Yaoilady
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyah! I can't wait to see what happens next! Your story is awesome! Keep up the great work!
person Meyme
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... how can I put this? It's not that it's a poorly written fanfic, it's just constructed to make people hate themselves. The torture made my stomach turn inside out, but then again, it wasn't trivialised either, for which I am awfully thankful. Iruka acts very strange though, and the slapstick parts SO don't belong there.
Naruto had his FUCKING EYES REMOVED. I can't get over that. By the way, what happened to Naruto's awesome healing abilities? I can understand there aren't many things to do once his fingers, feet, and/or arms are already cut off, but when he was fighting, where the heck did the fox go?

This is different. To bad the majority of your other reviewers are treating it like any other fanfic trash out there, it really doesn't do it justice.
person Shedding Ink
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I've been checking several times a day to see if you've posted a new chapter since the last. Poor Naruto's not as sexy chopped up and loosing a hand and parts of his feet and ear but I love this story. Please continue soon.
person Liliath
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa whoa WHOA!!! UPDATE MAN AND REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!
person VS
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update! That's our Naruto! Defiant as long as he's still concious! I laugh at that snake bastard. I think a little piss in the mouth isn't nearly bad enough for him though.
person akuma_river
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god. Those bastards need to die and painfully. Dear god poor Naruto. He isn't going to whole anymore or the same anymore or happy anymore. The nightmares will kill him. What about Kyuubi does he break free? Why did they do this?

On a side note, while reading this chapter in the campus computering cause my laptop (Lappie) is down, and listening to yahoo music launch program, REM's Losing My Religion came on. Sadly enough it seemed to fit.

Poor Naruto.
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. I loved it! Very nice torture scene. Only thing I can say negatively is that there was not enough action on the part of Orochimaru or Itachi....a little too much Kabuto...Other than that, it was great ^_^