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for Abandoning Hope

by Mieren

person Anon
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. You have to continue soon. Maybe I'm a sadist but I seem to enjoy stories with the torture of my favorite characters. It beats the fluffy romance you usually find.
person Liliath
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool, really cool, Im kinda sadistic so I think it was great!YAY! update soon!!!^^
person blisblop
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow,like Itachi would ever buddie up ,esp. like that with Orrochimaru and without Kisame or another Akatsuki.I do wonder what is interesting about torture,only ever read one good torture book (Raw Pain Max) and the pay back was increadable,but it was the heroine Max who carried it,even Suzie Brights stuff gets too over the top.Like why isn't Kyubie (spelling) melting their faces off?Because it is a fan fic and your are writing for sadists?O.K. but the torture did not seem to work,Naruto is pretty chipper,Sasuke hasn't gone Ape shit.Where is Tsundae?I guess the point of the gore is escaping me.I must say the first chapter was really f'd up/shocking,that worked but it has really powered down to simple gross out.Can not wait to see what could be the point.
person -
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well.. its different i'll give it that.
person Ru-Shin
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL BASTARDS!!!!
T-T Poor Naruto...and that was only the beginning!! T___T

Never-the-less, I liked it. ^^ Please update soon.
person VS
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This... I like. Keep up the good work. ^_^ Poor Naruto. Why do us pervs torture him like this? At least in this one he seems to be handling it well like he actually would and not collapsing into a shuddering heap of trauma incarnate. Although I would expect him to be a bit different and much more... I dunno, frail? Especially with no eyes and one hand. He's gonna need his buddies. ^_^

I really look forward to seeing more of this.
person VS
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Poor Naruto. Well, I'm glad we get to see what happened to him. I'm also glad to see such a quick update. ^_^
person Ru-Shin
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is great!!! Poor Naruto-kun. T-T But I'm so happy that he's getting better.
*shakes her fist threateningly at you* You had better update soon! *goes all sweet and innocent again* Please? *bats her eyelashes*
person Rosemary
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, can't wait to find out why ;)
person someone
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its a really awesome story so far!...but...poor naruto...his beautiful blue eyes and his hand are gone! HOW SAD!!! *cries* POOR NARUTO!!!! I hope he gets better soon! I hate it when he looses his eyes as in they are gone..not just blind..and his hand....but it really is a well created story! even though I hate things like this (loosing his hand/eyes, or anything else that can't grow back), you have managed to keep me reading it! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! and update soon!!!