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Okay, when i read "graphic torture" i was thinking something else. I would definitely add a squick warning in there somewhere and maybe blood and gore because the way you worded things in the summary felt more like some kind of bondage rather than gory disturbing material. Actually, I wouldn't classify naruto's situation as torture because he wasn't tortured. He was just mutilated and got a few lims chopped off. It's would be more like excessive violence, blood and gore, squick material. The effects of his attack may be torturous for Naruto, but i guess it depends on your definition.

But please, please, please, put more warnings.

I guess once you get past the extremity of the situation, it's pretty good. It's just a little too extreme for my taste. If they were to bury a kunai in anyone's eyes all the way, I'm sure the kunai is long enough to hit the brain. It's amazing how no one came to Naruto's aid when he was attacked. I'm sure there was some point in time where he was kicking and screaming on top of his lungs before they injured him. It's scary how Naruto was actually alive and didn't die from blood loss. The human body doesn't contain a lot of blood and even though his attackers took precautions to prevent him from bleeding to death, it's still a little disturbing.

Thank you.

WUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!how sad poor poor naruto i hope sasuke kills his brother for what he did to "his dope" muahahahahaahahahahahaha!!!

oh well this one helluva great story please contiune cant wait to read what happens in the next chapters!!


UNTIL THE NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!!!

ohhhhhh..... poor kid, that realy sux. i will continue to read though!

OMG!! YOU TOOK HIS EYES OUT AND CUT OF HIS LIMB???? WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HIM!! DIE YOU EVIL PERSON DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!! T_T but first....update!!^^ man, could you put up a good description of what really happened?? and man, make it really graphic and cool!!!!!! XP okay okay, Im not perverst, sadistic or what, me just curious^^....*sweatdrop*....eh *sigh* DARN IT!!!!!!>.< eh, just update, everything else is fine^^

I'm loving it! So bloody. So gory. So....sexy! Can't wait to read the rape scene. Heh. >) Orochimaru and Itachi my two favorite characters. X3

hm...such graphic details, and i love every single gruesome description! please do update soon! it is only on such rare occasion that i get to read such sadistic piece of art!

lmao ooh i love Kakashi! heheeh...i feel sorry for Naruto ;.;. please update!

>.o ouch poor Naruto! please update

hi.. is there going to be some pairing? like sasunaru?

Dear god. When you said in the summary that they teamed up on him I was expecting something else. How on earth is he even alive? Is going to be able to live? What about his body's arms, legs, eyes, stomach? Are they going to be fixed and usable?

Keep up the good writing. coolsa.