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that was amazing. You had me bawling my eyes out. Kudos.

I have read half of this story befor and I remember liking it. So I'm going to read it agian and finish it this time!

this fic was simply amazing. there were parts that made me sick, happy, sad and alot of other things. although it's an old fic you should have it checked over by a beta and repost it.
this was amazing!!!

I really enjoyed this story. It was really deep and touched a lot of things. I hope for a little eploge to see what Kyuubi's life will be like now that he's human :]
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I want to preface my review by saying that I have read 'Broken' several times, and was unable to review it until now because I was not an Author. Now that I have my own profile, however, I rushed to review this story that has held me captivated from the first page.

First of all, it was long. It took me, a fairly fast reader, between ten and fifteen hours to read it from start to finish, more than the seventh Harry Potter book. That you made it this long, and interesting through the entirety, is a feat in and of itself, and I applaude you for writing a book sized fic with no promise of compensation.

Secondly, instead of being just a series of events or a string of smut, it was character driven, with characters that stayed true to form and expanded on the author's original concept, even when you claimed that you started writing it as a way to relieve stress. The fact that I cared more about the characters than about the sex or the nifty plot twists is not to be belittled, since that is rare even among novels and even more so among fanfics. I wanted Naruto and Sasuke to make it work and nearly cried when it almost didn't. I held my breath durring the dramatic scenes and wanted to punch someone during the sad scenes. I really empathized with the characters, and that is no small accomplishment. I mean seriously, I wanted Kyuubi to be happy at the end.

Thirdly, even though the people were most important, the plot (and the sex) were equally rivetting. Parts had me on the edge of my seat with anticipation, and I was not dissappointed. The descriptions of the battle scenes, the effects of the drugs, and the brutal rape and torture were scintillatingly accurate and breathtaking.

To make what could take up pages quite a bit shorter, you should write a book. Seriously, if you wrote your own book with original characters and all that jazz, I would buy it. And recomend it to all my friends, even the ones that don't like this kind of thing.

Noss de Sagel

PS Oh, and if you have the time, I am writing a fic, and would be honored if you read it. ^_^

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So awesome.

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I loved the story! you did so good on it! Hope we see more things like this from you!

love the story