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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.............oh my god... catchs breath i love it by the gods hurry soon well as soon as u can when the server things come back on lol me can't think
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thx for the chapter!
im so glad things are finally looking up for the guys! and oro's dead! woohoo!
and naruto to the rescue of sasuke's molestation by oro was a great scene. the irony of oro dying by his own sword was good too.
update soon!
im so glad things are finally looking up for the guys! and oro's dead! woohoo!
and naruto to the rescue of sasuke's molestation by oro was a great scene. the irony of oro dying by his own sword was good too.
update soon!
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg thats really good.. the story is really good in my opinion... but hurry and write MORE... lol.. pls.. i wnat to know where they are going.. KAY CYA n tc..
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wowwwww!!!!!!!!! That was outstanding! The final fight was amazing, original and had a natural flow to it, even the techniques you created suited the characters accordingly. I totally loved it. Of all the fictions that I have read, this one has the most awesome description, natural flow and twist of plot! I can hardly wait to read the next chapters and wonderful writing! Bye!
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FIX THE DAMN STORY IT'S ANNOYING TO HAVE TO SCROLL BACK AND FORTH JUST TO READ TEH DAMN THING!
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. i dont really know what to say after reading your fic.
but most of all, i'd like to congradulate you on a fic well written. really well written. i was teary-eyed all throughout the fic; the scenes were horrific, graphic, and very detailed. sometimes, i was so absorbed into the plot and scared sh!tless of what was happening that i mearly scanned the text and glazed over some of the more gruesome scenes. but im still glad that it was so detailed, it put much more depth into the plot. i have no personal experience with any of this, both on drugs or rape, (and for that i feel quite lucky), but after reading your fic, i often feel that i've been given a glimpse of the mindsets of all those who've fallen under the influence or have had their lives brutally shattered. very enlightening, ansty and again, amazingly written.
the only bit of hope, from koshi (sp?), was the only thing that kept my spirits up when reading. i really do hope they get a realitively 'happily ever after' ending, considering what both sasuke and naruto had gone through. the thing w/ oro/naru was definately unexpected - but it also definately made the plot so much more significant. oro's such a bastard... lol.
also, i was hoping that later in the future, i'd get to see more sasu/naru scenes, when they're both sober and mentally stable that is. i guess i'll stop my blabble now, update soon!
but most of all, i'd like to congradulate you on a fic well written. really well written. i was teary-eyed all throughout the fic; the scenes were horrific, graphic, and very detailed. sometimes, i was so absorbed into the plot and scared sh!tless of what was happening that i mearly scanned the text and glazed over some of the more gruesome scenes. but im still glad that it was so detailed, it put much more depth into the plot. i have no personal experience with any of this, both on drugs or rape, (and for that i feel quite lucky), but after reading your fic, i often feel that i've been given a glimpse of the mindsets of all those who've fallen under the influence or have had their lives brutally shattered. very enlightening, ansty and again, amazingly written.
the only bit of hope, from koshi (sp?), was the only thing that kept my spirits up when reading. i really do hope they get a realitively 'happily ever after' ending, considering what both sasuke and naruto had gone through. the thing w/ oro/naru was definately unexpected - but it also definately made the plot so much more significant. oro's such a bastard... lol.
also, i was hoping that later in the future, i'd get to see more sasu/naru scenes, when they're both sober and mentally stable that is. i guess i'll stop my blabble now, update soon!
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeyyyyyyy! Sasuke is back to being the responsible (for lack of a better word) person from being a junkie! I felt so bad for Naruto. Anyway, good work and please update soon!
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a close one. I thought for a moment there that Naruto was gonna die and that the story would end. I am glad that Sasuke was able to bring back some small glimmer of hope in Naruto. I am afraid that hope wont last long. I cant wait till the next chapter.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You shorten the whole Kimon incident...GOOD! The old verision bored me!
Can't wait for the escape and then into the part with Gai's team and company!!
Please don't change anything from the whole 'Gai's team and company' part too much! Add extra details but don't change the main parts! They're SO good as it is!!
PS I still think Shino is jealous of Naruto and Sasuke's relationship...
Can't wait for the escape and then into the part with Gai's team and company!!
Please don't change anything from the whole 'Gai's team and company' part too much! Add extra details but don't change the main parts! They're SO good as it is!!
PS I still think Shino is jealous of Naruto and Sasuke's relationship...
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why wont you update! First you write a story and never finish it then you rewrite it and NEVER UPDATE! WAHHHH! update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna know what happens because I can't rememeber!