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Hey man why aren't you updating.
Are you dying or just dieing?
Are you snoozing?
Or just boozing?
But whatever I'm just reviewing!

Wow they are in a real jam now. Great work.. cant wait for the next chapter.

Wow that was an awesome chapter. I am glad that naruto got out but I fear that his freedom will be very short lived. I cant wait for the next chapter.

*Sigh* I almost wish you hadn't gone back to re-edit the stories, since that means I'll have to wait awhile to get to the point where the fic originally left off at. Ugh, stupid cliffhangers. Anyway, great fic. Loved the sex scene and the plot. The characters were also pretty in-character. Good job.

This fic is amazing. You do the torture scenes so well and actually show that there is a level of pain where a person is, for a moment, willing to do anything to make that pain stop. I'm going to definitely keep up with this fic. Your style is fantastic and the way you describe things is captivating. The only problem I have with your fic, and I have to admit it is very important, is that you need a beta reader. Normally when a fic has so many spelling mistakes, I can't read it because I get distracted wanting to correct it so badly. I should be majoring in English honestly. But your fic wouldn't let me abandon it. I'm completely caught in it.

This chapter was a very good remake and much beter then the last one. I am devided on the Rut 2 part. I liked the first one and the new one was also good, if a little longer. I could go either way with it. Anyhow, I eegerly await the next chapter. One thing I could see happening to add to the strain of Sasuke and Naruto's relation ship later on would be for Kyuubi to go after Neji when they meet up. You had strain between the three already (I have read the orginal before you started to repost and enjoyed it very much) but that would really test their relationship. I could see Kyuubi being into the Hyuuga since Neji is powerful and feminine enough looking. Sasuke could come in and get Kyuubi off of Neji, or just end up trapped to. This would cause Naruto to slid backwards, but if Neji and the others forgive him it could give him a great push forward and he could vow to have beter control over Kyuubi, making it harder for Kyuubi to break out. Your call of course and I am certaintly not telling you how to write your story, like I said I enjoyed it before and and greatly enjoying the repost, but as an author on FF myself I know how helpful suggestions can be.

Poor Naruto being forced to give in. Being reminded almost to the breaking point of what was thought about him. Poor Sasuke being abused and so confused on who he was and what he wanted. Can't wait for more.

I like the old lemon scene better...but keep the end with the finger-f*cking. I actually like that scene. Just give us old version and when you get up to Sasuke crying about not protecting his orifices, end it with that finger-f*cking scene.

much better!!! i love it this chapter-as creepy as that sounds. i was reading this fic up until you started to edit the whole thing-so sasuke had already OD in the presence on gaisensei and neji. about how long do you think it will take to get back to that point or are you rewriting the whole thing?

hey there, this is there first time ive reviewed your fic broken but ive been reading from almost the very begining (and thats before the re-write) and ive loved it since the first chapter all those months ago and have been sulking and eagerly awaiting each new chapter. but id just like to say that all of your re writes have been fucking fantastic and this latest chapter the kubi/sasu, i dont no how you did it but some how you improved on a master.

PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!
WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!