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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...at least you didn't start re-editing during the cliffhanger.That would have been horrible!! UPDATE...EVERYTHING!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Review in progress tbh
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it! The chapters are really great and I want to see more!!! Keep continuing and update the later chapters soon, it totally got me hooked ont it! The plot just keeps getting better and better!
-Elk
-Elk
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what the? are you done writing it? NOOOO I REALLY LIKED IT!
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute, heatwarming and funny.
Can't wait till next time!!!
Can't wait till next time!!!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Showing some soliderity know here boys,excellent.Thanks for smut.It is always good,yup always.This is getting exciting eh?Wondering what the heck Sasuke has Planned.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That nice...if they started fighting Itachi and the other Akatsuki members in this chapter, it would have felt very rushed. Now we're ready for some Akatsuki fighting!! Is Shino jealous of Naruto and Sasuke relationship? That's what it sounds like to me!! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW!
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaay ^^
Whee for the squeeness. Poor Naru-chan ^^
Apart froma couple of gramatical errors (heh, this coming from me ><) that was awesome. I love how you described everything. it just seems... palpable and wondrous. You can almost see the flickering of the light through the trees in your head ^^ and all the rest ^^
Neji is awesome. I salute you XD
More! More!
Tsx
Whee for the squeeness. Poor Naru-chan ^^
Apart froma couple of gramatical errors (heh, this coming from me ><) that was awesome. I love how you described everything. it just seems... palpable and wondrous. You can almost see the flickering of the light through the trees in your head ^^ and all the rest ^^
Neji is awesome. I salute you XD
More! More!
Tsx
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome work, really awsome, i don't usually review but this fic really got me glued to the computer, especially the last few chapters...you portray their emotions so well and manage to keep them as in char as posible (especially sasuke) i luv the way he is so posesive when it comes to naruto.And the kyuubi part is very well writen too, it wouldn't have been plausible for kyuubi to not be a blood thirsty beast but it's not emotionless either...I can't wait to read more.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uuuh excelant chapter, it was really good, I'll be waiting in anticiaption until the next chapter.