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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Personaly, I liked the chapter. Being a fellow writer, I only post on fanfiction through, I know that even if the reader likes it, the writer sometimes can feel like the scene just doesn't express what you are feeling the charctors should express. Like trying to find a word to discrib somehting but being unable to find it and using another word in its place.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jeeez... Konoha attacked?...
But that's the chance Naruto need to show how great his shinobi skills became and how loyal he still is, right?...
Anyway, I like this chapter, it's like atransition from 'terrified and helpless' to 'stronger and getting better'.
Oh, and I really liked Neji's teasing :)
Update soon, I can't wait for Naruto's rehabilitation in Konoha!
But that's the chance Naruto need to show how great his shinobi skills became and how loyal he still is, right?...
Anyway, I like this chapter, it's like atransition from 'terrified and helpless' to 'stronger and getting better'.
Oh, and I really liked Neji's teasing :)
Update soon, I can't wait for Naruto's rehabilitation in Konoha!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...trap? home? love? Gah, you probably said what the word was and I skimmed over it XD;.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
anther wonderful chapter!! I hope they kick some akatsuki butt. Will Sasuke face off with Itachi? I can't wait. Thanks for the great story
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't type a lot have to go but still love it and need a whole lot more!
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I gotta admit...that lacked luster compared to the previous chapters. But I still can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON!!
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic is so bloody good...i've been checking in several times every day to see if there's any updates.. ^^;
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow just Wow..... the gore almost made me puke..... But It was worth it in the end its finally starting to show some sunshine!!!!! or... is it.... your mind is an enigma XDD please keep it up I'm always waiting for your new chapter to come out ^^
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really this story..i just happened upon it recently and it's a very good story. i do hope you continue this story.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, ...but Ita-san is waiting for them! THey walk into a trap and Naruto get's hurt all over again! *cries* Noooo! Hey...did I just pull a gai? My gawd I did...well anyway I asoluty LOVE this fic, it is one of my Favorites!