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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story, you really do get the emotions of Sasuke and Naruto out well. You express them well, though there are some mispelling and stuff despite it all this is a very moving highly emotional and intense peice of work you have here and I hope you will post another chapter soon because it's going to be thrilling to see what Itachi has planned for out boyz.
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! >_< They take too long! GR!!^^ Burt they're sooooooooooooo good! I love yur writing!! eeek!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Loved how the nurse knocked some sense into Gai and the others!! And well done on Naruto's outburst!! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh... A NaruSasu citrus! :) So sweet and sexy, and touching...
And the chap is so funny, too!! Gai's antics and Neji's reactions are just too hilarious, really XD !!
Oh, by the way, does Shino know about their little love-making, thanks to the bug?... But he's a one super-discreet guy, isn't he? :)
I'm anxious to read the next chap, as always :) Update asap!!
And the chap is so funny, too!! Gai's antics and Neji's reactions are just too hilarious, really XD !!
Oh, by the way, does Shino know about their little love-making, thanks to the bug?... But he's a one super-discreet guy, isn't he? :)
I'm anxious to read the next chap, as always :) Update asap!!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*just caught up with everyone else*
Let me get this straight...
Naruto has always been considered a demon by most of the villagers since he was born. This blonde had tried his best to display himself as the exact opposite of the fox demon inside him but the majority of the villagers STILL thought of him as Kyuubi.
Now, Naruto became infamous as Orochi's 'pet' who was used to destory about a dozen towns and cities. This has given the youko-hating Konoha villagers solid proof (or excuse...whichever) that the boy was really a blood-thristy demon that they always assumed him as. Yet...instead of hating Naruto even more...they all decided to realize at that moment...that Naruto was really a poor little tormented boy after all who Konoha needs to bring back into their lives?
...WTF?!
All Naruto had to do was act like a monster in order to get all of Konoha to acknowledge him as human and not as a merciless beast!! That meant all the good deeds Naruto has done for the sake of the village before was all for nothing!! THAT MAKES NO SENSE!!
Let me get this straight...
Naruto has always been considered a demon by most of the villagers since he was born. This blonde had tried his best to display himself as the exact opposite of the fox demon inside him but the majority of the villagers STILL thought of him as Kyuubi.
Now, Naruto became infamous as Orochi's 'pet' who was used to destory about a dozen towns and cities. This has given the youko-hating Konoha villagers solid proof (or excuse...whichever) that the boy was really a blood-thristy demon that they always assumed him as. Yet...instead of hating Naruto even more...they all decided to realize at that moment...that Naruto was really a poor little tormented boy after all who Konoha needs to bring back into their lives?
...WTF?!
All Naruto had to do was act like a monster in order to get all of Konoha to acknowledge him as human and not as a merciless beast!! That meant all the good deeds Naruto has done for the sake of the village before was all for nothing!! THAT MAKES NO SENSE!!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved this new chapter. And I guess they'll finally be going home, I want to see how Naruto reacts to Iruka, would probably do a lot towards making him feel better. Also do we get to see Gaara in this story? I love Gaara, and I love your story. So much so that I risked Hurricane Katrina frying my computer instead of turning it off when I saw that there was an update. YAY!!! So update soon, sooooooooon:D
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This gonna be short. Heh heh.
I'm starting to think you actually read my reviews. Yay! The dialouge was much better, and you had good flow. The only real problem I'm seeing is that there's still too much "explaining" going. A good story should let the characters talk naturally, like real people.
I'm starting to think you actually read my reviews. Yay! The dialouge was much better, and you had good flow. The only real problem I'm seeing is that there's still too much "explaining" going. A good story should let the characters talk naturally, like real people.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.What a turn around.I was very moved at the intellegent/aware treatment of Sasuke.It hit doubly hard after the chap that proceded it.Wow again.Naruto was very,very brave,it is oddly ironic he was using sex to "drug"(make him forget) Sasuke into forgetting his pain but it made a good point there are things as good/better than drugs to make certain things(lots and lots) better.It was just a well done mature chap and there are more good points I'll cover in my next reveiw,I just wants to" say hey" as soon as possible.Kudos.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Somehow, I feel like the story's slowly coming to an end. *sniffles* i don't want it to end!! *cries like a baby*
Love this fic, you've done a great job!
Love this fic, you've done a great job!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is the bomb.
Write MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Write MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!