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for Broken

by arora1

person Tech
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOSH SASUKE!!!
You make Mr.Mack- er.....GAI SENSEI MAD!!!!
<_<
Poor Naru.
Stupid Neji and his meddling.
*I love Neji, I really do but GOSH!*
person Leasan
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!!!!
all I can say right now is - UPDATE!!! U P D A T E S O O N !!!!
God!! Overdose?! OVERDOSE?! Are you trying to kill Sasuke????NNOOOOOOOO!!!!
We want LOVE, we want happy-commin-together!!! WRAAAH!!!

person Fallingstar
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THEN WHAT HAPPENS???????????????? I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person The Empress
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O *gasps* Oh no! Poor Sasuke. I hope he'll be ok. =( I hope Naruto doesn't go crazy on everyone. Man, now I absolutely must read the next chapter. Update soon, please.=) I can't wait to read more.
person Carrot
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*screams!!* i can't believe that!? Naruto needed him and he just did that!!!! ARG! Stupid Sasuke! He better get better!
...^^ i love this sotry sooo much!^^ can i make a suggestion!? I love it when Naruto runs to Sasuke for protection, it's just too cute!!^-^ eeeeeekkk!
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No!! Sasuke, what's wrong with you?! You were so close to being clean!! UPDATE SOON!!
person bhodi li
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigosh..this fic sooo rocks..i was kinda scared by the gore..but the complex Sasunaru relationship is wayyyyyyyyy too good to pass up...can't wait for your updates..please keep going =)
person Tech2
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squirms*
If you don't update really soon, In think I'm gonna explode!!!!
person bookworm51485
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!! I am so happy for the new chapter and now I can't wait for the next one. You did a lot better with this chapter grammerwise and things like spelling Gai's name correct, though I did notice a slip up once with that. Wow Sasuke is being such a jerk, though I guess I can understand why he's acting like that with his history. Are they going to take Sasuke to the doctor or are they going to try to deal with it on their own. God I can't wait for the next chapter. Is there any way for me to get early copies of the chapter, I want I want I want. Anyways I just wanted to say good job and I hope you update soon, reeeeeeally soon. SOOOOOOOOON. Like tomorrow soon, or wait how about today. Ok that's unrealistic, but still soon please. It's so good:)
person The Empress
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I freakin' love this story! *smiles widely* I can't wait to read the next chapter! I just can't friggin' wait. I'm gonna have to wait anyway though. :P Please email me when you update! =)