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OMG! I so didn't see that coming!!! >.< Dumb Sasuke, I can see why he did it but..... AARRRRGGGGG!! *rips out the hair on her head* I don't think he'll die but who know what will happen. I'm hoping the next chapter goes up soon.

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Dude!!! YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO DOWNLOAD VERY VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M ABSOLUTELY GOING TO FREAK IF YOU DON;T FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS A FUCKING GOOD STORY!!!!(and i dun normally swear!)

"Drugs are bad, mmmkay" LOL!!! One of my favourite South Park quotes! XD
This fic is sooo good, it's getting better and better and i can't wait to read the next part!! :)

"oh and drugs are bad mmK"

LMFAO. trust gai-sensei to kill a perfectly angsty moment saying something so typically like HIM. XDDD

AH, anther great chapter ^_^. Yatta, there are going to be going back. does that mean the fic will be ending soon? ;_;

Chapter 16 was so short *cries* I love this story, please get the next chapter up soon!

OMG I lOVE YOUR STORY! I started reading it today at like *looks at clock* noon. Now it's like *looks again* 2 am. Poor Naruto-kun and Sasuke-kun! At least they got out of that hell hole. *cheers because Orochimaru-baka is finally dead*This is the best fanfic I've read on AFF so far. But, I do agree with the majority of the reveiwers, a beta could do this story wonders (i mean it's still great without it, beta-ing it would just improve it). Sorry for the long review, I'm on caffine right know (needed it to stay up and read this) and I'm not allowed to have it so thats why the reveiw is the way it is. I must go now and send a link to this story to every anime fan I know. Please update soon!

I was wondering two things. I've seen this story on MediaMiner and I noticed that you had another story posted there. Were you planning on posting it here too. Also have you ever thought about getting a beta. It could take care of the spelling and grammer problems you have. I'm pretty sure you could find one, people really like your story and I'm sure there would be somebody willing to check from grammer and spelling problems just to get an advanced copy of the chapter. I would just advise getting a reliable one who isn't going to take a month to check grammer. Anyways again good job, please update soon, and I would love to see your other story here also updated:)

I'm so happy for the new chapter, was waiting to see what would happen when Naruto woke up and saw all the people from Konoha. Was a slight bit disappointed, somehow he seemed a bit too calm once he found out who they were. I figure he would still be freaked out because of what happened in Konoha. Also when is he going to find out that Iruka is still alive, I'm assuming that he is since you never made mention of him after you said he was alive again. I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to see how the people react when they find out what happened to Naruto at the sound. One change you need to make is that your mispelling Gai, its with an A not a U. Anyways good job, I really like your story, can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon:)