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by arora1

person Emma
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good!!!! The only annoying thing is that - especially in part 12 - you're overrepeating yourself with calling Naruto for "the blond". I would also recommend if you used a beta reader, as you frequently write typos (evan instead of even, justu in.o. jutsu, for example). But other than that, this story is excellent!!!! I loved that you made Naruto use the frog boss! XD (Haven't seen him around in most fics..) Keep up the great work!
person Akira
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell... I couldn't stop reading this! But Naruto needs his eye back! Maybe one of Kyuubi's(sp) could become his? One blue one red? I love everything else in it! Now things need to get better. Yay! I hope Sasuke well be on top though. I think that could help Naruto. Sorry I always like to guess or add ideas ^-^. Keep it up! Let me know when you write more!
person ku
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! That was the best chapter ever!
person Yay!
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They made it out of Sound! Yay, yay! (does the confetti thing) Yay! ^__^
person Tashasaphi
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More chapters like these! Aww loved that bit at the end. Sasuke being great and Nauro beign responsive. Poor Naru-kun gettin all brokded. Overall pleasing chapter. Likey likey!
person Kiri
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You sure got it in for Naruto, don't you? I gotta say, from all this, you're coming out as an evil sadistic bitch. But its a good story, don't know why, but I love the angst. But, I love Naruto, and I was wondering if he's ever going to get a break from all this and die, or will this be an unfinished fic? Or will this one won't have any happy endings at all. I mean...Shouldn't Naruto be broken by now? Even from all his hyperactiveness, I don't think any living being can go through this, with demon or not. Blah, nvm me, just reviewing. This is not a flame, and I'm sorry for calling you a bitch, just thought to put my opinion out. So, yeah, thanx for the good story. ^^ -Kirilian
person Chimi_Tenshi
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me like your story lots! XP
Wow, Naru-chan went through so much!! *sobs*
He's escaping now, but will he succeed? and if he does, how will Konoha view the idea of having Naru-chan back?
Me can't wait till next chappie!
person hogo-chan
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that poor baby is just cruisin' for a bruisin' isn't he? oh my... great chapter! and thanks for updating so fast! I hope you will be able to update again soon! ^_^
person redfox9t
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please don't hurt Naruto anymore. I feel like I'm going to throw up everytime you do something bad to him. I hope Sauske doesn't become addicted to the drug, and if he does finds another way to get it. Please update soon, and don't let Naruto get hurt!
person Psylocke
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*holds breath* and then what happens?? *huggles Naruto protectivly*