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Well.and so it ends .Hurrah for you, and the fic.A true epic this in more ways than one!Hope to hear from you again!Maybe a one off of a willing Sasuke and Kyubi?

That was the coolest story ever! it took me four days to read and it was so worth it! i loved it! it made me cry, it made me laugh, it made me skip meals to have more time with my computer to read it. It was an absolutely divine storyline and it so totally rocked. i applaud your talent and look forward to reading other things you've written. truly, this is a work of art in the fanfiction sector. kudos.

Awesome job, I loved how you came up with the ending. Sasuke deciding to take the Kyuubi's offer was so heroic and sweet and just a tad bit romantic! Great job.

This story was awesome, you should be very proud! I can't wait to read more of your works. Keep it up, okay?

This story despite its beginnings, you felt the need to beat the crap out of someone or something to that extent, This story became one hell of an emotional roller coaster ride. I loved and hated every moment of this story.

Thanks for everything you put into it.

I had my doubts about the whole mpreg thing, and while I'm still overjoyed that you went into that direction, I still have to admit that you did a wonderful job of doing it neatly. :)
This chapter was beautiful. And just as the rest of the fic, it was really intense with the emotions and there were a few times when I felt so much of the characters' pain that I wanted to cry.

You've done an excellent job!! This is one of the best Naruto stories that have ever been written.

(although, i must confess i felt a little disappointed that you didn't write the Kyuubi/Sasuke sex scene in this chapter, lol! ;P )

I didn't like the ending. It went by too fast. It was an awsome story till the last chapter! blah anywho congrats on finishing.

the only thing negative i have to say about this story is to watch spelling. there were a lot of spelling mistakes, and if you'd like, i'd be more than willing to go over this with you, to help you correct those. i know you mentioned several betas, but they've missed the spelling. your grammer, punctuation, and continuity are amazingly polished, however, the spelling is lacking.

otherwise: wow. that's all there is to say. wow. you wrote one hell of a wonderfully charged, emotional, beautiful, touching, heart-wrenching story. it was an adventure reading through this story, knowing that there should be some kind of resolution for the pair, knowing it wouldn't necessarily be happy. you did a such a wonderful job with this story. you have startlingly wonderful control over the characters so that they were in character while still living out the life you created for them in this story. so many times i found myself gasping in shock at something that had happened or impatiently waiting for the next chapter to load. i finished this story in the past two days, if that tells you how much i've enjoyed it.

well, that's all i've got to say. other than thank you for an amazingly wonderful read and keep writing. you've got a wonderful talent. and good for you, serving the country.

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf

Bravo!!! *standing ovation* Thats was a great ending!!! I love that Kyuubi let Naruto keep his memories of Sasuke ^_^ I wonder what Kyuubi will be like when he grows up. btw, I loved the way you developed Kyuubi's personality as well as Naruto's. You did a fantastic job!! It really fit him!!! Anywayz, Fantastically awesome and amazing job!!! It was one of the BEST fan fictions I've ever read and I hope to see more of your work in the future!

i'm happy thata kyuubi got his wish, to get his own body. now he can love sakuke and sakuke will love him too. maybe not in the way he wanted, but still it worked. i liked this final chappie alot it almost made me cry when naruto said he wanted to leave cause he didn't know who he was anymore. anywho i'm glad that it ended on a happy note.

ja ne till next time (hopefully in another story)

This was incredible and I love you *huggles* I was crying for the first half of that chapter too, believing that you'd actually be cruel enough to allow Naruto to disappear from this world. I don't know how to thank you for the way the story ended. I love it. It's the happiest ending in the world. I would never have dreamed that you'd allow it in such a way. But you did. I love you =^-^=
You gave my Naruto his bubbly energy back. And now he's got a son. I am so glad that Sasuke put up with the Kyuubi. So Naruto has no more demon in him,...no more worries. You know when Kyuubi was telling Sasuke that Naruto wouldn't remember anything that had happened btwn them? I was soooooooo sad. I wanted to scream and damn the computer and then angst like an emo b/c it would be something that you'd do w/o a second thought. So obviously, that's how I believed the story would end. With Naruto never knowing what happened and with Sasuke holding a baby in his poor tummy. You really are something ^^ You have my props for one of the BEST stories I have EVER read. And your beta's did a great job as well. I can't believe that it's finally done. Finally over. It's so sad T.T But relieving in the same way.

It was very nice getting to review this story and watch it grow into a beautiful piece, hope there'll be more like this in the future
Btw, I love how you named the chapter. Fixed. What was Broken is now fixed. ^^ I worship you *.*

Love ¢¾

~Ria ^.~