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Yeah! I really liked that chapter, I don't know why but I enjoyed it the most out of all of them so far. I love hw you have the important scenes, but you don't forget about some of the characters' silly personalities (like Gai's "Men cannot get pregnant!" line). I also giggled when Tsunade mused how she should've banned the boys from the room (lol, inner-yaoi-fangirl. We're all one at heart).

I really loved how you wrote the scene with everyone and the Kyuubi, that was cool. You display his emotions very well. I also liked how you didn't have Sasuke agree with the offer, for that would'n't be really realistic if you did. This way, it stuck with the characters and kept it real.

Loved how you ended the chapter, great job! The waking up part was very accurate.

Overal AWESOME job!!! Update soon! I can't wait till the next chapter!

Incredible. Absolutely amazing. I love you ^^ Kyuubi's request startled me for a while, but I felt too bad for him to think it would be gross. I kinda wished that he had his own body. Now I feel so sorry him for Sasuke putting him back in his cage.
For just the first paragraph where Naruto was waking up towards the end of the chapter, I thought that maybe Kyuubi blocked all the horrible memories b/c Naruto seemed out of it. He didn't know what he was in the hospital, and couldn't remember how long he was there. So then I thought maybe he blocked Naruto's memories so Sasuke would like him. Am I strange for actually feeling bad for the demon? O.o

Ria

Good luck with your next chapter ^.~

OMG! I just luv ur story, when I first found out about it, I read every chapter up till this one!!! I am hooked!!!!!!!!! I'm obsessed!!!!!!!! Plz pretty plz update this soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or I will go nuts and commit suicide >< Grrrrrrrrrrr... Ok now, that that's out, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^o^

I like your perspective on how the story could go. One of the peps in my yahoo group brought your work to everyones atintion . I think everone was happy to see something new in the lines of Naruto .Please keep writing.

horray i liked the added chappies. Poor kyuubi he's not use to allthose emotions then coupled with the fact that the others' emotions aren't for him but for naruto must be hard. i wonder if they'll come

to a compromise or something. can't wait till you add more this story must be butter cause it's ona roll! LOL anywho keep up the good work.^_^

ja ne till next time

Woo, a breather in between chapters where nothing too horrific happens save the screaming and tearing up Iruka all night! And woo, Sasuke is finally back in the scene. He better damn well save Naruto soon or something. Hehe, although that was pretty funny when he was like 'Oh yeah, I guess Naruto and me, yeah that would be kind of gay.' I chuckled. And I liked that the cutting of the apple thing made me think of their first big fight on top of the hospital building (uh in the actual naruto, not in this lovely fanfic). I have a feeling the next chapter is going to be emotional to say the least.

That was a great chapter. I can't even remember when I started crying, but I know that it stopped around the time that Sasuke and Sakura left the room. It's good to know that Kyuubi trusts Irukia, but I kinda felt bad for him when he was jealous of Naruto. All those thoughts about the blonde has everyone by his side, but no one would ever love him. Well yeah, he's a demon. But it was still so devastating to read. Poor guy. I hope he doesn't go crazy when he see's Sasuke.

Good luck with your next chapter ^^



Ria

thank you for the gift, i been looking forward to an updat for a long time! it such a great story, you are so good with emotions and i love the kyubii like this!

I LOVED this chapter. You really write your characters well.

I really feel for the Kyuubi, because he's right, he can't get anything that Naruto has. And that really... really sucks for him. But he shouldn't hate Naruto for it! It's not like they chose this!

Anyways, awesome job. I can't wait till the next chapter (though I am sad that it's ending soon) so update soon!

Awww...Kyuubi learned and enbraced the concept of human emotions! How cute~! But will Sasuke will to give Kyuubi some emotional lovin'? I hope so!

UPDATE SOON~! UPDATE SOONER~! UPDATE NOW~!