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yay sasuke got sakura to take him to see kyuubi.. i can't wait to read what will happen next... now that kyuubi knows HE loves sasuke, what will his reaction be when sasuke's right in front of him again? this chapter actually made me sad for kyuubi! can't wait for the next

I love this fic so much...!!! *gives you a bunch of red roses* Although, one part in this chapter made me worry a bit.... "It did not matter if the creature selected to mated with was male or female, all demons held themselves to the gender of male and the integral ingredient was not their sperm but the chakra infused in it that rearranged the reproduction organs to handle a demon whelp or made them if none was present." Please tell me there won't be any mpreg! *begs on my knees* Even if you were to write it I wouldn't be able to read it. :( Please don't have mpreg in this fic!

this my most favoretist fanfic eveerrrr the chapters are all nice and long (you know like in takeing more than five minutes to read) and its also so very well writen unlike some of the other stuff out there, the plot is like just...... awsome theres no other word for it. ya'no anuf with the shitty compliments just keep upthe good work, keep writing (I will aaaalllllwaaays be a fan), and KEEP UP DATEING. OR I WILL BE FORCED TO TAKE DRASTIC MEASURES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok now i'm good. Please continue doing........... whatevert is that you happen to be doingi'm done now........going to stpo talking any minute now........any minute......

fuck, this is such an amazing story, i couldn't stop reading it for the past 2 days! all the details and ordeals and violence and pain and emotion you've put into it all just has been one crazy, sick, amazing, breathless, breathtaking, (and at times even sweet) ride!! the way everything has come together so far is like... not at all what i expected, but oh so much better... and now i've come to chapter 25 and i don't want to stop!! i want there to be more now! much much more!! i have to know what happens next and i feel like waiting is going to be unbearable.. i'll try to deal though :p but i really do hope there's more soon!!!!

~ lg

*wipes away tears* wow....each and every chapter of this fic brings out so many emotions.... I can't find the words to say how much I love Broken, so I'll just second what kyuubigrl said.

I leave you rediculously long reviews all the time, so this one will be short. Just for the sake of your sanity. I have to agree with what Kyuubigirl said. I'm so paranoid right now that it isn't even funny. I think throughout that whole chapter I've been dreading with tears thinking that someone was going to die. Especially with stupid Kyuubi trying to be Naruto. *shakes head* It was so smart of you to have had Tsunade make ANBU watch over him. She is a sennin and everything, but I thought that you would have had her as the type of person who would have been so glad that Naruto was alright that she wouldn't have caught that abrupt hesitation that he had with her in that first encounterance. So glad that Iruka is finally mentioned. And what's this? Him and Kakashi? You know, I have to be truthful and say that I have NEVER really read a KakaIru story. Do you have any that you recommend?

I'm not worried about Sasuke's operation only b/c I know that he has really responsible ppl in charge of it. Like Shizune.

Good luck with your next chapter ^.~


Ria =^-^=

Woo yeah another chapter. You're so damn reliable, and of course it's the first one I'm gonna read today! Ok, so OMG, speaking of unpredictable, I was like alright, author's going a little soft, letting Kyuubi know what love is all about, and then Iruka comes along and wow, total traumatized Naruto meltdown that broke my heart because once again Naruto (well Kyuubi) has to relive those horrible memories, which now makes me wonder what if Naruto's trapped in this one particular memory as he's stuck inside being all comatose. GAH! And then there's hope, because at least poor Naruto might be able to feel/tell that he didn't murder Iruka, and so Naruto can be all better now, right? WRONG. Then he's going to go kill Sasuke? Nooo! I think I went through eight hundred emotions within that one chapter and now I have to go sort of cry and be confused somewhere. But now at least Iruka can watch over him and maybe Naruto will come back, but it doesn't help the situation with everyone thinking the kyuubi is still a threat! Please don't let Sasuke die in surgery! Now I'm paranoid, or what if Sasuke's all like, oh Naruto would never want to live like this so I have to kill him. BAH. No! Let them adopt some injured bunnies and create a better tasting, long-keeping instant ramen cup or something, and the Uchiha clan magically repopulates even though they live together! Oh, I mean I'll read another fic if I want a super happy ending... woo, next chapter! YOU ROCK!

*tears!* IRUKA'S STiLL ALiVE!! yes!! i was heartbroken over his death ^^;; i really hoped he hadn't died
Kyuubi and emotions, interesting concept ^_^
Great chapter! hope for more soon!

I'm so glad you updated!! Awesome chapter, I really enjoyed it.

I like how you wrote the Kyuubi and about how he tried to sort out his emotions. His reaction when he figured out that he loved Sasuke was very realisic.

Can't wait until the next chapter so update soon, alright?

I love this story, you made my sadistic and perverted mind happy, wee, please add a new chapter soon