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for Surreal

by RandomFluff

person Kusachu
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This makes me giggle. *hee hee hee.* Nice characterization. Planning on adding more little random smutty things? I must know.
person lo
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was cute, it made me grin. try not to rush the flow of the story, take your time and have fun with the character interaction. Good job
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