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for Prize: The Heart of Konoha

by kawaiikitsunethief

person yoroshiku
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool. just one question: did u hafta stop so soon?
person ayachan
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.... sad, but really really good.. update asap please! >< and don't let naruto be in pain anymore
person ChiK
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! THIS IS GETTING INTERESTING >u> XD

WHY DIDN'T NARUTO USED THE POWER OF THE KYUUBI? OO!!!

UPDATE SOON!
I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT XD

MMMM WHY DID SASUK WANT NARUTO? >D
person Jenny
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This sounds very interesting..update soon!! :DD
person Ash
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmm so very sexy. *drools* more please!
person tenohikari
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Already I love evil-Sasuke, please continue!
person mika
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was so good! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz write more! what a sexy story, i will be waiting! no joke!
person BoyBeaterBlue
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update...if you don't I will seriously start crying and you don't want that on your concience do you?
person dorkie
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although not fully in naruto's character to be held captive like that, I LIKE IT!!! sasuke and naruto, where naruto would obviously be the uke of it all.........Oooooo yummie!!! GOod job!!!! can't wait until the next chapter it out!!! hrm would love a longer chapter pertaining to what exactly sasuke will do *smirks* ^___^
person Kativa-chan
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh well, I'm just glad it's back ^.^

It wasn't NC-17 on ffn though, it was more like R...Argh, dumb people