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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, can u update this? i am waiting. it's nice.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating and heart-wrenching. I really hope you plan on finishing this.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just want to tell u that i love your story....so update soon! ^^
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this ,hope to read the end.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to finish this. It is soooooooo goood. You are shaping this story into something great. well it you feel like doing anymore, great!!! If not, I really enjoyed reading this great story.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! great story, I hope to see what happen next! Are you going to say how Sasuke-kun got hurt so badly?! Cause I wanna know, please *puppy dog eyes* Yeah but I wuv this story!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...should I just give up on this ever being updated ;-;
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! You updated!! I think...well...no..I think you put in a disclaimer xD
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! Evil, EVIL HUMAN!
Write more.. or.. or I'm going to cry! AAAAAGH!
-loves fic to death-
Write more.. or.. or I'm going to cry! AAAAAGH!
-loves fic to death-
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually prefer uke Sasuke, but this fic is so fantastic, I just can't get enough of Sasuke playing his sexual mind games on Naruto. Why haven't you added more chapters yet?? Please keep writing!!! I keep checking back, and re-reading, but there are never more than 6 chapters! XO
Can I also request flashbacks to what Itachi did to Sasuke? (Showing what Sasuke did to Kabuto would also be fskin awesome, but I have a feeling it would sidetrack from your story too much... still, in all my love for this favorite pairing of mine, I'd love to see it!) I actually got a request from someone to write a "prequel" to this fic with Itachi and Sasuke, but 1. I have no right to and 2. I could not even begin to approach your skill in writing such a thing. Youre really masterful at this. Except... YOU NEED TO KEEP GOING! Why do all the best authors stop in the middle of these great fics???!!!!
Sigh... must I remind you of how wonderful each and every bit of this is? But I'm already late to dealing with all the RL stuff your fic distracted me from. Fine: one bit... umm, all of Chapter 6. The abused side of Sasuke coming out makes him sexier, fleshes out his character, and not only gives a more solid reason for him to be doing what he's been doing (as victims of abuse often copy their abusers, and I can definitely see Itachi treating him similarly. Only Itachi doesn't have the damage from having been raped influencing him... truly cold and cruel the whole way... unless you give him other aspects like certain feelings for his brother... oh I want to see you write this so much...), but also appears in just the right amount at just the right time for him to do that whole gentle comfort thing for Naruto after he calms down. We get to see more of Naruto's VERY 3D personality, too, very skillful with wanting to run but then feeling pity for him then getting all confused and letting Kyuubi comfort him. It's a surprise to see such a sudden shift from Sasuke when Naruto wakes up and he goes from being comforting to being a cruel prick as usual, but it is also very revealing of his personality/damage: yeah, he has his weak side, and Naruto did something that maybe even touched him, and he's capable of kindness, but for now at least this isn't going to change how he acts with AWAKE Naruto. Or even in any time other than his rare moments. He's still fucked up and sadistic. And it's good pacing... it's too early for him to start being NICE to Naruto. You've found a way to show his side that's hurt and wants to comfort, without needing to change the direction of the way he interacts with Naruto.
And umm yeah, the whole chapter was fucking HOT. The bleeding wounds were a great touch. And as always, the bondage, even to the point where Sasuke's pinning Naruto's wrists to the wall when he rubs him off towards the end. Paralyzing him was brilliant, and I feel like you could do a really hot lengthier scene with Naruto like that, but of course the bondage made me perfectly happy! And the way that through the fic, he doesn't just go tie him up and rape him, but does this whole insidious thing with feeding him, patiently twisitng Naruto to become his pet or something like that... So much more amazingly masterful and sexy than if you'd just written Sasuke shoving Naruto in and out of a cage and tieing him up, which I cannot possibly imagine in this fic. It's just so good the way you're doing it. I LOVE YOU! In a really sick way.
Now KEEP GOING! We're going to find out what this whole meeting is about, right? Maybe it has something to do with what attacked Sasuke. I wanna see how Naruto feels and how others react to him at the meeting. Ooh, what will each of their friends think?? Will Sakura flip out? Will inner Sakura think "I wanna be Sasuke's whore"? Will they just stare in uncomfortable silence? How will it change things, if it does? And, of course, hot dominating SasuNaru when they get back home. Ooh, and they haven't had anal yet, I can't wait to see how you approach that... and of course, it would be nice if the cat people show up again. And flashbacks to SasuKabu *whine* or maybe just mentioning thing he did to him... :/ Looking forward to any hints you drop about what Itachi did. And umm yeah more of Sasuke making Naruto his bitch. RAR! *flees to do everything I've been putting off*
Can I also request flashbacks to what Itachi did to Sasuke? (Showing what Sasuke did to Kabuto would also be fskin awesome, but I have a feeling it would sidetrack from your story too much... still, in all my love for this favorite pairing of mine, I'd love to see it!) I actually got a request from someone to write a "prequel" to this fic with Itachi and Sasuke, but 1. I have no right to and 2. I could not even begin to approach your skill in writing such a thing. Youre really masterful at this. Except... YOU NEED TO KEEP GOING! Why do all the best authors stop in the middle of these great fics???!!!!
Sigh... must I remind you of how wonderful each and every bit of this is? But I'm already late to dealing with all the RL stuff your fic distracted me from. Fine: one bit... umm, all of Chapter 6. The abused side of Sasuke coming out makes him sexier, fleshes out his character, and not only gives a more solid reason for him to be doing what he's been doing (as victims of abuse often copy their abusers, and I can definitely see Itachi treating him similarly. Only Itachi doesn't have the damage from having been raped influencing him... truly cold and cruel the whole way... unless you give him other aspects like certain feelings for his brother... oh I want to see you write this so much...), but also appears in just the right amount at just the right time for him to do that whole gentle comfort thing for Naruto after he calms down. We get to see more of Naruto's VERY 3D personality, too, very skillful with wanting to run but then feeling pity for him then getting all confused and letting Kyuubi comfort him. It's a surprise to see such a sudden shift from Sasuke when Naruto wakes up and he goes from being comforting to being a cruel prick as usual, but it is also very revealing of his personality/damage: yeah, he has his weak side, and Naruto did something that maybe even touched him, and he's capable of kindness, but for now at least this isn't going to change how he acts with AWAKE Naruto. Or even in any time other than his rare moments. He's still fucked up and sadistic. And it's good pacing... it's too early for him to start being NICE to Naruto. You've found a way to show his side that's hurt and wants to comfort, without needing to change the direction of the way he interacts with Naruto.
And umm yeah, the whole chapter was fucking HOT. The bleeding wounds were a great touch. And as always, the bondage, even to the point where Sasuke's pinning Naruto's wrists to the wall when he rubs him off towards the end. Paralyzing him was brilliant, and I feel like you could do a really hot lengthier scene with Naruto like that, but of course the bondage made me perfectly happy! And the way that through the fic, he doesn't just go tie him up and rape him, but does this whole insidious thing with feeding him, patiently twisitng Naruto to become his pet or something like that... So much more amazingly masterful and sexy than if you'd just written Sasuke shoving Naruto in and out of a cage and tieing him up, which I cannot possibly imagine in this fic. It's just so good the way you're doing it. I LOVE YOU! In a really sick way.
Now KEEP GOING! We're going to find out what this whole meeting is about, right? Maybe it has something to do with what attacked Sasuke. I wanna see how Naruto feels and how others react to him at the meeting. Ooh, what will each of their friends think?? Will Sakura flip out? Will inner Sakura think "I wanna be Sasuke's whore"? Will they just stare in uncomfortable silence? How will it change things, if it does? And, of course, hot dominating SasuNaru when they get back home. Ooh, and they haven't had anal yet, I can't wait to see how you approach that... and of course, it would be nice if the cat people show up again. And flashbacks to SasuKabu *whine* or maybe just mentioning thing he did to him... :/ Looking forward to any hints you drop about what Itachi did. And umm yeah more of Sasuke making Naruto his bitch. RAR! *flees to do everything I've been putting off*