rate_review Reviews

this story was so well written. I hope that one day you will continue. It is great. I love how the characters and the plot are developed. This is one of the top pieces of fiction that I have read. Keepup the great work.

So far I love it to death! It's very well done, plus it looks like your having fun with it by adding in characters. I hope you are! ^-^ Keep up the good work! I hope to see more from you in the future! (Meaning i can't wait to read the next chapter!^-^)

~Akira~

oh... vamos actualiza.... ;__; porfavoooor?

I must say, this is my favorite Naruto fanfiction. I love the storyline and the growth of the characters from where the series began. I don't know what more to say, except I love this story. It has every element I adore in both a slash lemon and a regular story. I hope you will conitune with this story.

Jodea Moondreamer

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *cries* T_T that's so mean you knowwwww I can only hope that sasuke cames back ti his own self T-T poor poor naru-chan

*wraps around leg and stays there*

This is a great fic, very well-written, and it's great that you're taking the time to create an in-depth, well-developed plotline and taking things slow but still having sex scenes. As much as I want to jump straight to gratuitous violent rape scenes, the pacing of this story is very good and you're really skillful in telling it so far. I'm anxiously anticipating what's going to happen next, and I can't wait till you get to heavier stuff with Naruto and all the waiting is gonna make it that much better when it finally comes around.

Compelling plot, not just with the promises of more sex between Sasuke and Naruto. I can't imagine who Sasuke's opponent that scratched him up like that was... I want to see more of the cat-girl and her "keepers"... and it's interesting how it's developing with Sasuke having been abused, and Naruto looking for the "old" Sasuke, and all the unexpected ways Sasuke acts, and how this might turn into a healthy healing relationship between them (or something of a twisted version of it) instead of making a beeline for degradation and heavy violent rape... and then Kyuubi getting involved is really interesting... OMG this is such a good fit! Yay! Of course I'm hoping for Sasuke to get really violent with Sasuke, but the way it is going it looks like he's mostly going to be gentle... either way, I'm going to enjoy reading it, because you're such a good writer!

Are you going to do any more with Kabuto? I'd like to see more of him. Is there going to be more plot involving the kitten and her keepers, or was the thing with Kabuto, Eriko, Mina and Miyu just to let the readers know what's going on?

Keep up the good work! SOON! I will stalk you and whisper perverted things into your ear as you sleep if you don't update with another chapter soon!

Specific elements I liked: Naruto's willingness to sacrifice himself for Konoha, and that he has the chance to defeat Sasuke through endurance and love rather than brute fighting strength; Evil Overlord Sasuke (I never thought of that one before, but now that I do think about it it's really cool, and hot) especially since his evil is such that he's not REALLY evil like Itachi or Orochimaru (he doesn't randomly kill his servants!); the fact that Sasuke got raped by Itachi (maybe you could give us some flashbacks?) and its hardening effect on him, a second trauma to accomplish what killing the clan did not; his beautifully touching nightmare; the explicit hot sex XD

Overall: *speaks reverently and happily* This fic, I love. It reminds me very much of several of my favorite dark fics I read in another fandom. The captivity, ownership, and rape (or some combination of them), which are underlain ultimately not by real malice but by real love, is among my absolute favorite motifs, particularly when it transforms the participants higher, into something nobler and better. In the hands of a skilled writer the beauty of that motif is unmatched.

*tugs at hair* AUUUGGGGH! PLEASE I'm BEGGING you, U-P-D-A-T-E!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAUGGGGGH! It's toooooo GOOD to stop!!! ><

Yaaaa!! please update soon... ive been waiting for an update for ages this is just WOW im in love :D
could u please email me when u update?? i treavel alot.. work and whatnot so i never know if i missed something, and this i really dont want to miss.. soo cool :D

I usually hate reading angsty fics such as these, but DAMN this was good! It drew me in the whole story, and you managed to make Sasuke and Naruto's characters believable. I'd love to see more! Don't keep your fans waiting :)