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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Is there ever going to be more of it? *weeps*
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-laughs evilly- i say sasuke should break naruto then try and fix him when hes noticed what hes done ^_^ cause im evil that way lol cant wait for more!!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this fan fic a lot. I like the idea of it for some odd reason. And will you please upate soon cause I wanna keep on reading but since you aren't updating I can't!!!!!
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this story has become my ultimate favorite Naruto fanfiction. It has a touch of romance, drama, and angst. It is very well written and the characters seem to follow their true selfs. Your ability as a writer shines through. Your story has kept me wishing for more and more. I do hope to see a few more updates within the next year, but if you are too busy, it is understandable. This story is worth waiting for.
Jodea Moondreamer
Jodea Moondreamer
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMFG! YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE THIS!! omg i just realized that you also wrote forced hand, and konoha garden. and i was like....wow because i read the other two before this one and i thought they were all by different authors, until i reached your bio. Guh! you MUST update this one though! it's so heartbreaking at times when Naruto reminisces about their past and all that mumbo jumbo that makes me get all teary. so PLLLEEEAAASE update!! please? EEP i'm going to go read this again. haha. UPDATE!
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh crap. i went back to the bio to realize you didn't write the other two. my goodness, i have no idea how i saw those two names. but i DID! -___-" ok whatever...ha ha ha. *embarassed* well whatever cuz this one's realllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly good too. haha, but sorry for the misunderstanding, maybe i was on the wrong page or something...like it was recommended reading....but those names AREN'T on your page....so....maybe it's some other author's recommended reading... -___-" haha. okay well update soon!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man, i like you fanfiction...
but its a bit shocking though to know that sasuke actually 'play' with kabuto too... for me, sasuke could only fall, touch or molested naruto! but its fine, still like it anyway!
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but its a bit shocking though to know that sasuke actually 'play' with kabuto too... for me, sasuke could only fall, touch or molested naruto! but its fine, still like it anyway!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry, havent finished yet...
advice: dont let naruto just surrender to sasuke. he has to put up a good fight to sasuke. hecant just let or even more so inb\vite sasuke to fuck him... you know what i mean!!!
keep up the good work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
advice: dont let naruto just surrender to sasuke. he has to put up a good fight to sasuke. hecant just let or even more so inb\vite sasuke to fuck him... you know what i mean!!!
keep up the good work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nuu dun tell me there's goona be no more update for a while ;-; or rather x.x
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..sorry, I'm a really unimaginative reviewer, so I can't come up with anything other than:
mwah! please continue soon~!
mwah! please continue soon~!